One of the best ways that parents can help their teenage children prepare for adult life is to encourage them to take a part-time job.

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...trong actor. i like this statement. So, i think it is an excellent idea that pare...
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... another phase of life or adulthood and help them to find a part time job. However, it is imprtan...
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...fe or adulthood and help them to find a part time job. However, it is imprtant for childr...
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... future and to be strong on their life. i really like and encourage the parents t...
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...ea for their teenage children. First, i believe that all parents should encoura...
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...uld encourage their teenagers to find a part time job for themselves. However, this idea ...
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... their self-finance. For instance, when i was teenager my parents encourage me to...
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...nager my parents encourage me to find a part time job because i should support my life in...
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...rage me to find a part time job because i should support my life in university. I...
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...support my life in university. In fact, i should pay my fees. Moreover, i am agre...
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...n fact, i should pay my fees. Moreover, i am agree with the essay statement that ...
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...t, i should pay my fees. Moreover, i am agree with the essay statement that says, &ap...
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...se of life and encourage them to find a part time job.' i like this statement and i ...
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...age them to find a part time job.' i like this statement and i do not like a...
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...me job.' i like this statement and i do not like another person support my l...
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...other person support my life. Second, i believe that it is necessary for all pa...
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... to encourage their teenagers to find a part time job. And passionate them to stand by th...
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...ionate them to stand by themselves. So, i believe life is difficult they should p...
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...oney. For instance, my father provide a part time job when i was in school and i start fi...
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... my father provide a part time job when i was in school and i start finding money...
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... part time job when i was in school and i start finding money. After, two years m...
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...as in school and i start finding money. After, two years my father died. So, i contin...
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...y. After, two years my father died. So, i continue my life without any tension be...
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...nue my life without any tension because i made money and i knew the difficulties ...
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...ut any tension because i made money and i knew the difficulties of life. Third,...
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...ife. Third, when parents provide some part time job for their teenagers or encourage th...
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...make them strong in life. For instance, i start working when i was child so now i...
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...ife. For instance, i start working when i was child so now i support my life and ...
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... so now i support my life and sometimes i help my parents too. However, i encoura...
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...metimes i help my parents too. However, i encourage my teenage children to follow...
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...me direction and support them to find a part time job. i love this idea. and suggest for ...
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...d support them to find a part time job. i love this idea. and suggest for all par...
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...d support them to find a part time job. i love this idea. and suggest for all par...
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...find a part time job. i love this idea. and suggest for all parents to do the same....
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...arents to do the same. To sum up, as i mentioned in above lines i am agree wit...
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...o sum up, as i mentioned in above lines i am agree with essay statement that says...
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... up, as i mentioned in above lines i am agree with essay statement that says, 'i...
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...urage or help their teenagers to find a part time job. because they can support their lif...
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...heir teenagers to find a part time job. because they can support their life. Like, they...
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...heir teenagers to find a part time job. because they can support their life. Like, they...
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... continue their life in the right ways. i usually have a proverb 'No pain no...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, really, second, so, third, for instance, i think, in fact, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 7.30242825607 219% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 90.0 22.412803532 402% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 30.3222958057 148% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.01324503311 219% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2088.0 1373.03311258 152% => OK
No of words: 463.0 270.72406181 171% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50971922246 5.08290768461 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.04702891845 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55966042862 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 145.348785872 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.352051835853 0.540411800872 65% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 661.5 419.366225166 158% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 25.0 3.25607064018 768% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 13.0662251656 214% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.6511198235 49.2860985944 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5714285714 110.228320801 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5357142857 21.698381199 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06452816374 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 43.0 4.19205298013 1026% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 4.33554083885 438% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.476730702861 0.272083759551 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158845004487 0.0996497079465 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124443471421 0.0662205650399 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.33195708812 0.162205337803 205% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494382534172 0.0443174109184 112% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.3589403974 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 53.8541721854 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.0289183223 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 12.2367328918 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.27 8.42419426049 74% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 63.6247240618 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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