Pterosaurs
The passage enumerates that pterosaurs were not capable of flight by saying that pterosaurs are were cold-blooded, they are heavy animals to stay in the air and are not able to take off from the ground. While the lecture professor disagreed about pterosaurs were not able to fly.
At the beginning of the first paragraph, the passage mentioned that pterosaurs are cold-blooded so they couldn't have the ability to fly. However, the lecture states that if pterosaurs had been founded that they have hair. It probably means they were warm-blooded animals and they could have the energy of flight.
The second point in the passage cites that it's hard for pterosaurs to stay in the air because they were quite heavy. But the lecture suggests again that pterosaurs' bones were hollow so it made the pterosaurs lighter. The lighter bones that pterosaurs have can let them able to fly easily.
Lastly, in the third paragraph, the passage said that were not able to fly because pterosaurs couldn’t take off from the ground by stating this the lecture restored that the pterosaurs used all 4 hands and feet to move. Even the biggest ones could run fast enough or jump high enough to get off the ground.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The passage enumerates that pterosaurs w...
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Line 1, column 99, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...of flight by saying that pterosaurs are were cold-blooded, they are heavy animals to...
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Line 1, column 206, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e not able to take off from the ground. While the lecture professor disagreed about p...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ut pterosaurs were not able to fly. At the beginning of the first paragraph,...
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Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...hat pterosaurs are cold-blooded so they couldnt have the ability to fly. However, the l...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hey could have the energy of flight. The second point in the passage cites th...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ave can let them able to fly easily. Lastly, in the third paragraph, the pass...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, lastly, second, so, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 30.3222958057 82% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.01324503311 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 1373.03311258 73% => OK
No of words: 206.0 270.72406181 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84951456311 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.04702891845 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44866706649 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 145.348785872 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 301.5 419.366225166 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2900586597 49.2860985944 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9 110.228320801 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 21.698381199 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 7.06452816374 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.412924728275 0.272083759551 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.208870263587 0.0996497079465 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123323843982 0.0662205650399 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.290366133802 0.162205337803 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.093731744803 0.0443174109184 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.3589403974 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.8541721854 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.2367328918 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.42419426049 85% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 63.6247240618 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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