The reading and the lecture are both about people nowadays read less literature. The author of the reading feels that it's a shame that fewer people treat literature seriously in the present in comparison in the past, and the author also thinks what literature can bring to people will not being replaced by other forms of entertainment as television or web pages, which grab people's eyes most of the days.The lecture challenges the claims made by the author. The speaker of the lecture is of the opinion that reading less literature cannot be said to be a one hundred percent negative situation, also the reader is definitely not the only one to blame
To begin with, the author argues that there's nothing serve as the perfect intellectual stimulation as literature does. The article mentions that literature does help a lot with people's development on imagination, the ability of empathy, and being capable of realizing the meaning of various form of words. The specific argument is challenged by the lecturer. She claims that literature is not the only types of reading materials that can be seen as intellectual; science, political science, history and many more other types of books can also be good.
Secondly, the author states that other forms of media like webpages or television are something distracting people from focusing on literature; hence making people miss out the benefits they used to take from literature. The lecturer rebuts it by mentioning that the literature can't be said to be the best, there is always non-literary medium better than literature. She elaborates this by bringing up the point that music and movie have their own style of expression, and they may speak more that word-based literature.
Finally, the author posits that people read less nowadays causes the publishers to invest less in good writers, which in term result in fewer good written literature. As a result, the amount of audience and literature decrease from time to time as the vicious cycle keeps running. In contrast, the lecturer strongly opposes this argument by stating that the modern literature is kinda difficult for reader to understand, the writer themselves don't change much for the audience so it's not the readers to be blame for this.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
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...hich grab peoples eyes most of the days.The lecture challenges the claims made by t...
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...hich grab peoples eyes most of the days.The lecture challenges the claims made by t...
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...allenges the claims made by the author. The speaker of the lecture is of the opinio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, in contrast, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 30.3222958057 162% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1886.0 1373.03311258 137% => OK
No of words: 373.0 270.72406181 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0563002681 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.04702891845 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68087399309 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 145.348785872 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522788203753 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 419.366225166 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 14.0 8.23620309051 170% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 21.2450331126 146% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.8167589291 49.2860985944 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.166666667 110.228320801 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0833333333 21.698381199 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06452816374 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226252078627 0.272083759551 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825333005995 0.0996497079465 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617385702421 0.0662205650399 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137841736881 0.162205337803 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565855413697 0.0443174109184 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.3589403974 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 53.8541721854 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.0289183223 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.66 12.2367328918 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 63.6247240618 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.7273730684 177% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.498013245 137% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.2008830022 170% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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