sea otter population started declining rapidly due to environmental pollution or attacks by predators
Both the passage and lecture discuss about sea otters. More specifically, in regard to the passage, the writer puts forth the idea that the sea otter population started declining rapidly due to environmental pollution or attacks by predators the lecture disagrees to that.
First and foremost, the author of the reading states that the pollution is likely the cause that their source such as oil rigs, other source of industrial chemical pollution, and increase level of chemicals in water cause the deaths of otters. Some professionals in the same field, however, stand in firm opposition to this claim. In the listening, for example, the professor states that more than pollution predations the most likely cause of decline population of otter. If they would have died cause of the pollution then they would have found the dead bodies, but there are none.
One group of scholars, represented by the writer, thinks that other mammals such as seals and sea lions were also declining with the same cause as the otters this again points to environmental pollution which effects the entire ecosystem. The orca predators don’t get the affected cause the survive on other whales. Again, the speaker specifically addresses this point when he states that orca predator eats other whales, and the whales have disappeared Alaskan coast because of humans. And so maybe the orca has changed their diet with other mammals.
Finally, the author brings his argument to a close by suggesting that scientists believe that the pollution hypothesis could explain the uneven pattern of decline of otter at Alaskan cause of current or environmental factors. While some remain stable in population. Not surprisingly, the lecturer takes issue with this claim by contending that the orca predator whales who rely on whether the most on is the location is accessible or not. They are so big that they can’t access the shallow or rock locations and these are the location where the otter where they hide. So maybe this could be the reason of uneven decline of otter population not pollution.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 481, Rule ID: IF_WOULD_HAVE_VBN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'had died'?
Suggestion: had died
...of decline population of otter. If they would have died cause of the pollution then they would ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 287, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... predators don’t get the affected cause the survive on other whales. Again, the speaker spe...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 552, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... changed their diet with other mammals. Finally, the author brings his argument ...
^^^
Line 4, column 227, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...se of current or environmental factors. While some remain stable in population. Not s...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, so, then, while, for example, such as, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 30.3222958057 122% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 5.01324503311 319% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1373.03311258 126% => OK
No of words: 341.0 270.72406181 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08797653959 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57473663782 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 145.348785872 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539589442815 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 419.366225166 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.9184478294 49.2860985944 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.666666667 110.228320801 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7333333333 21.698381199 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06452816374 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344347373244 0.272083759551 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105585295397 0.0996497079465 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145486218092 0.0662205650399 220% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231065450028 0.162205337803 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.158243185056 0.0443174109184 357% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.3589403974 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.8541721854 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 63.6247240618 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 481, Rule ID: IF_WOULD_HAVE_VBN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'had died'?
Suggestion: had died
...of decline population of otter. If they would have died cause of the pollution then they would ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 287, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... predators don’t get the affected cause the survive on other whales. Again, the speaker spe...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 552, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... changed their diet with other mammals. Finally, the author brings his argument ...
^^^
Line 4, column 227, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...se of current or environmental factors. While some remain stable in population. Not s...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, so, then, while, for example, such as, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 30.3222958057 122% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 5.01324503311 319% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1373.03311258 126% => OK
No of words: 341.0 270.72406181 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08797653959 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57473663782 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 145.348785872 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539589442815 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 419.366225166 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.9184478294 49.2860985944 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.666666667 110.228320801 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7333333333 21.698381199 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06452816374 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344347373244 0.272083759551 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105585295397 0.0996497079465 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145486218092 0.0662205650399 220% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231065450028 0.162205337803 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.158243185056 0.0443174109184 357% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.3589403974 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.8541721854 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 63.6247240618 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.