smart cars
Symbolic in science fictions, smart cars may eventually come true with its cutting-edge auto drive system. Advocates for this game-changing upgrade in the automobile industry proclaim that these self-driving cars will be safer, quicker and less expensive than conventional cars. Nevertheless, a lecture on this invention may shatter their confidence.
The lecture first states a simple fact: any device can have glitches or even malfunction. It may be true that the automatic driving system can avoid collision with the help of built-in sensors and theoretically eliminate human errors while driving. However, when the system fails, more cars and victims will be involved in the accident, because smart cars tend to be packed closer to each other on the road. Therefore, it is still too soon to say that these computerized cars are safe.
Admitting the high speed of smart cars, the lecture then makes a logical prediction that a growing number of people will choose driving over public transportation to commute due to the convenience brought this new technology. The additional cars on the road will surely test the capacity of the highway system and cause congestion that in turn slows down the traffic. So even the smart cars can be faster than traditional ones, the passenger are unlikely to enjoy the trip.
Finally, the lecture intends to warn those excited by news that self-driving cars can save their money. Shorter route equals longer life span of the car parts, but the car itself, thanks to the very expensive global positioning technology and sensors required for auto drive, should also be expected to be costly. And people may well be advised that the bill for repairing these fancy gadgets is no joke as well. Therefore, it is probably unwise to replace the old car with the new toy before doing the math.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 129, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to drive'.
Suggestion: to drive
... a growing number of people will choose driving over public transportation to commute d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, then, therefore, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 5.04856512141 257% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1373.03311258 111% => OK
No of words: 302.0 270.72406181 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05960264901 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66059551136 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 145.348785872 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619205298013 0.540411800872 115% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 419.366225166 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8828326789 49.2860985944 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.142857143 110.228320801 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 21.698381199 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06452816374 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 4.33554083885 231% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343972131796 0.272083759551 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118852940223 0.0996497079465 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102030713652 0.0662205650399 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223689951951 0.162205337803 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316602903265 0.0443174109184 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.3589403974 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.8541721854 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 63.6247240618 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.