Is space exploration worth the cost?
Throughout the years, human beings have invented or discovered many things, such as computers and telescopes, which allow us to observe Earth's history and the planets around it. Nowadays, we have a large number of problems on our planet, and we have to consider moving to other planets to save our lives. From this perspective, I believe space exploration is worthwhile. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explain in the following essay.
To begin with, overpopulation is one of the biggest problems on earth, and it spells the depletion of natural resources. Many scientists and governments have proposed a number of strategies, but it takes a long time to fully recuperate. Therefore, many scientists have started to take account of the possibility of moving to other planets. If we manage to do it, humans can live longer than we expected.
Secondly, space exploration will greatly contribute to our intelligence. After humans explored the moon, they could assume and understand a large number of things, which helped us to increase our knowledge. If we want to know more about our planets or surroundings, we should invest in exploration. Therefore, many people have a positive opinion about exploring.
Finally, if we give more thought to space exploration, humans will be able to travel to other planets, which will undoubtedly help us understand our own and other planets.Therefore, I totally agree that space exploration is worth the cost.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using 'the surrounding planets'?
Suggestion: the surrounding planets
... allow us to observe Earths history and the planets around it. Nowadays, we have a large number of pr...
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...he planets around it. Nowadays, we have a large number of problems on our planet, and we have to ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...humans can live longer than we expected. Secondly, space exploration will greatly...
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... moon, they could assume and understand a large number of things, which helped us to increase our...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...have a positive opinion about exploring. Finally, if we give more thought to spac...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...us understand our own and other planets.Therefore, I totally agree that space exploration...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, i feel, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.4613686534 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 30.3222958057 109% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 1373.03311258 90% => OK
No of words: 239.0 270.72406181 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16736401674 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07858818653 2.5805825403 119% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 145.348785872 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585774058577 0.540411800872 108% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 419.366225166 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.9907509936 49.2860985944 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.272727273 110.228320801 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7272727273 21.698381199 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06452816374 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175222335788 0.272083759551 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634930571147 0.0996497079465 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0968397977205 0.0662205650399 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121051502524 0.162205337803 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110658584809 0.0443174109184 250% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.3589403974 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.8541721854 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.2367328918 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 63.6247240618 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.