summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on specific points made in the reading passage.
According to the passage, there are three theories about the lives of agnostids. The lecture, however, doubts these three theories and thinks that there are serious weaknesses in these theories.
First, the passage explains that the agnostids were hunters and prayed the smaller animals. This idea is refuted by the lecture, which claims that animals in open oceans that are predators have usually large eyes. These large eyes help the animals to see the pray clearly. The agnostids were blind, therefore, they needed a specific ability for detecting the pray and there is no evidence to show the existence of this ability.
Second, the passage thinks that it is possible that agnostids have lived on the seafloor. The lecture, in contrast, disagrees with this belief, suggesting that animals that live on the sea surface are not able to move very fast and very far. Hence, we cannot find them anywhere else. Because the agnostids have been found in multiple areas, it shows that they could move fast and large distance.
Third, the author of the passage writes that the agnostids may be parasites. The lecture, on the contrary, states that the population of parasites are not large. There are vast amounts of agnostids' fossils. It indicates that the population of them were large and they were not parasites.
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- Independent writing TPO 51 3
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is more important for universities to invest in infrastructure and physical plant than to invest in keeping the faculty satisfied. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- TPO53 3
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- TPO 52Do you agree or disagree?The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. 60
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, may, second, therefore, third, in contrast, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 22.412803532 120% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 30.3222958057 66% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1095.0 1373.03311258 80% => OK
No of words: 218.0 270.72406181 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02293577982 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35885547278 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 145.348785872 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532110091743 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 419.366225166 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4292582347 49.2860985944 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2142857143 110.228320801 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5714285714 21.698381199 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06452816374 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.27373068433 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0931322099151 0.272083759551 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0304391872068 0.0996497079465 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0217489510321 0.0662205650399 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0568935040134 0.162205337803 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0160249889244 0.0443174109184 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.3589403974 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.8541721854 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.2367328918 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 63.6247240618 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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