Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they change the specific arguments presented in the reading passage.
The reading states that new regulation for coal ash is not necessary and provides three reasons of support. However, the professor explains that new rules are required and refutes each of the author's reasons.
First, the reading states that rules are already exist. The professor refutes this point by saying that current rules are not sufficient. For example using liner is just required for new company and old power plant building do not use liner. It causes many problems such as mixing harmful chemical into water. She states that using liner should be a rule for all new and old company.
Second, the article claims that strict rules discourage the recycling of coal ash. The professor opposes this point by stating that establishing new rules does not necessarily mean people would stop using such products. For instance, mercury, which is a hazardous material, is under strict regulation. However, these strict rules have been successful and people have had few concerns about i. She also added that people do not afraid to use them.
Third, the article states that new regulation will increase the cost for power companies, which eventuate in increasing cost for costumers. The professor disagrees and explains that with new regulations the cost will definitely increase but the result worth the cost. A company will spend 50 billion dollar for new implantation, which seems a lot. Despite this fact, the final cost for customer will increase just about one percent, which worth for having cleaner environment.
The reading states that new regulation for coal ash is not necessary and provides three reasons of support. However, the professor explains that new rules are required and refutes each of the author's reasons.
First, the reading states that rules are already exist. The professor refutes this point by saying that current rules are not sufficient. For example using liner is just required for new company and old power plant building do not use liner. It causes many problems such as mixing harmful chemical into water. She states that using liner should be a rule for all new and old company.
Second, the article claims that strict rules discourage the recycling of coal ash. The professor opposes this point by stating that establishing new rules does not necessarily mean people would stop using such products. For instance, mercury, which is a hazardous material, is under strict regulation. However, these strict rules have been successful and people have had few concerns about i. She also added that people do not afraid to use them.
Third, the article states that new regulation will increase the cost for power companies, which eventuate in increasing cost for costumers. The professor disagrees and explains that with new regulations the cost will definitely increase but the result worth the cost. A company will spend 50 billion dollar for new implantation, which seems a lot. Despite this fact, the final cost for customer will increase just about one percent, which worth for having cleaner environment.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- TPO 44 73
- TPO 45 3
- Some parents offer their school-age children money for each high grade (mark) they get in school. Do you think this is a good idea?Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 63
- TPO43 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, second, so, third, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 30.3222958057 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1373.03311258 93% => OK
No of words: 248.0 270.72406181 92% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17338709677 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44422366375 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 145.348785872 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556451612903 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 419.366225166 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.709592729 49.2860985944 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.1875 110.228320801 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 21.698381199 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06452816374 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242997111425 0.272083759551 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929374730961 0.0996497079465 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126823584502 0.0662205650399 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189133032191 0.162205337803 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146587860404 0.0443174109184 331% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.3589403974 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.8541721854 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.0289183223 73% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 63.6247240618 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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