summerise the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the specific point made in the reading passage.
In this set of materials, the reading part explains three theories explain why sea cows were been extended and the listening section cast doubt on the information presented in the passage and argues that theories illustrated in reading were wrong and he introduced some reasons for his claims.
first, the passage posits that sea cows were extended because a lot of them were hunted by native people. However, the lecture makes the point that sea cows were giant. they had 10 tons weight. they such bulky animals that native people couldn't hunt a lot of them made them to extinct.therefore, he refuted this theory.
second, according to the text ecosystems changed and make sea cows to extinct. the speaker disagrees with this point, and, asserts that, if ecosistems had been altered, other animals such as whales would had extincted so they popularity were constant and only see cows were extincted.
third, the article claims that fur traders make them extinct. on the contrary, the lecture points out that fure traders arrived bering island when see cows had been extincted befor they arrived so that they could not made them extinct. therefore the third theory of writer cannot be true.
In conclusion, the talk bolsters, the mentioned pieces of information in the passage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: First
...ntroduced some reasons for his claims. first, the passage posits that sea cows were ...
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Line 2, column 169, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...kes the point that sea cows were giant. they had 10 tons weight. they such bulky ani...
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Line 2, column 194, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...ws were giant. they had 10 tons weight. they such bulky animals that native people c...
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Line 2, column 237, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...y such bulky animals that native people couldnt hunt a lot of them made them to extinct...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Second
...nct.therefore, he refuted this theory. second, according to the text ecosystems chang...
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Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...s changed and make sea cows to extinct. the speaker disagrees with this point, and,...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Third
...tant and only see cows were extincted. third, the article claims that fur traders m...
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Line 4, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd only see cows were extincted. third, the article claims that fur traders make...
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Line 4, column 63, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...ims that fur traders make them extinct. on the contrary, the lecture points out th...
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Line 4, column 218, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'make'
Suggestion: make
...for they arrived so that they could not made them extinct. therefore the third theor...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
... that they could not made them extinct. therefore the third theory of writer cannot be tr...
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Line 4, column 237, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: therefore,
... that they could not made them extinct. therefore the third theory of writer cannot be tr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, therefore, third, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 30.3222958057 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1070.0 1373.03311258 78% => OK
No of words: 212.0 270.72406181 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04716981132 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.04702891845 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4952607268 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 145.348785872 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594339622642 0.540411800872 110% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 419.366225166 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.9694370909 49.2860985944 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2727272727 110.228320801 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 21.698381199 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 7.06452816374 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 4.19205298013 286% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170271560577 0.272083759551 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583893762659 0.0996497079465 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461638618116 0.0662205650399 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0873831286063 0.162205337803 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327631556091 0.0443174109184 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.3589403974 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.2367328918 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 63.6247240618 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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