There is some theories about the agnostides which had been extincted 450millions years ago.
The reading and listening passages have conflicting opinions about a group of extincted marine animals that had called Agnosite. That was one of the arthropodian specious. The reading presents three reasons. The lecture , on the other hand, categorically refutes all three episodes of theories mentioned in the passage. Citing that each of three theories has serious weakness.
First, the reading states that the agnostides may have been strong predators. On the contrary, the lecturer opposes this due to some evidences that there isn't any fossils to recognize it exactly. The professors declares that arthropods have large well-developed eyes. However agnostid had tiny poorly eyes or even they had been blind and they never been predator as all.
Second, the writer claims that agnostids would have survived by grazing on bacteria because they had been inhabited on the seafloor like other primitive arthropods. In contrast, the listening contends this theory by concentrating on movements of seafloor's animals. It's their features that they can't move very fast or far. Evidences show that each agnostid had been seen on multiple geographic area in large distance. Consequently, it is unusual for seafloor animals.
Finally, the reading believes that the agnostids were parasite. Whereas,the author declares this theory was ruled out due to size of parasite's populations. This means that population of parasites can't be so large.But fossils of agnostides suggested that they had large population before.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...s this due to some evidences that there isnt any fossils to recognize it exactly. Th...
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Suggestion: declare
...to recognize it exactly. The professors declares that arthropods have large well-develop...
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Suggestion: However,
...hropods have large well-developed eyes. However agnostid had tiny poorly eyes or even t...
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Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put after the verb 'been'.
Suggestion: been never
...es or even they had been blind and they never been predator as all. Second, the writer ...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...ting on movements of seafloors animals. Its their features that they cant move very...
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
...s animals. Its their features that they cant move very fast or far. Evidences show t...
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...ieves that the agnostids were parasite. Whereas,the author declares this theory was rul...
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Suggestion: But
...opulation of parasites cant be so large.But fossils of agnostides suggested that th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, however, may, second, so, well, whereas, in contrast, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 30.3222958057 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1373.03311258 93% => OK
No of words: 232.0 270.72406181 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52586206897 5.08290768461 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79920467202 2.5805825403 108% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 145.348785872 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616379310345 0.540411800872 114% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 419.366225166 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 21.2450331126 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7089729431 49.2860985944 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4117647059 110.228320801 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6470588235 21.698381199 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23529411765 7.06452816374 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 4.19205298013 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.27373068433 257% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250952234363 0.272083759551 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065753904447 0.0996497079465 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582320526506 0.0662205650399 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14142024532 0.162205337803 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325496019249 0.0443174109184 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.3589403974 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 53.8541721854 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.2 12.2367328918 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.42419426049 113% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 63.6247240618 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.7273730684 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.498013245 69% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.