Thr reading passage and lecture about creation of strikt brule to regulation coal ash handlind and storage. The author states, stricts rules are unnecessary. The lecturer casts doubt on claim made in article. She mrntions, these rules are very important to prevent invirnmont pollution.
First, the writer cliams, effective environment regulation already exist. there are especial liner material that prevent coat ash from leaking. Thre professor in the other hand contradicts this point. She states, to prevent coal she from leakage, we should constrict new lines, this is because, old ones do not prevent leakage of chemical material to water so it lead to contamination of drink water.
, Second, The author argue, icrease in strikt rules discourage people to recycle coal.The professor says, there is no relation between strict rules and recycle. He mentions, mercury is a poision meterial. There are very stricks rule about using it, but still people recycle it correctly. Futher more, they use it for many purposes.
Finally, author says, stricts rules will rise coal cost , This will inforced companies to rise price of electricty. The professor reputs this statement. She elaborates on the big benifit from these rules which is worth it, as a compare with very little increase in the price of electricity.
Thr reading passage and lecture about creation of strikt brule to regulation coal ash handlind and storage. The author states, stricts rules are unnecessary. The lecturer casts doubt on claim made in article. She mrntions, these rules are very important to prevent invirnmont pollution.
First, the writer cliams, effective environment regulation already exist. there are especial liner material that prevent coat ash from leaking. Thre professor in the other hand contradicts this point. She states, to prevent coal she from leakage, we should constrict new lines, this is because, old ones do not prevent leakage of chemical material to water so it lead to contamination of drink water.
, Second, The author argue, icrease in strikt rules discourage people to recycle coal.The professor says, there is no relation between strict rules and recycle. He mentions, mercury is a poision meterial. There are very stricks rule about using it, but still people recycle it correctly. Futher more, they use it for many purposes.
Finally, author says, stricts rules will rise coal cost , This will inforced companies to rise price of electricty. The professor reputs this statement. She elaborates on the big benifit from these rules which is worth it, as a compare with very little increase in the price of electricity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 12.0772626932 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 30.3222958057 82% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1106.0 1373.03311258 81% => OK
No of words: 209.0 270.72406181 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29186602871 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.04702891845 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58449885468 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 145.348785872 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655502392344 0.540411800872 121% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 419.366225166 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 3.25607064018 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 21.2450331126 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.6216926143 49.2860985944 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.7333333333 110.228320801 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9333333333 21.698381199 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 7.06452816374 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398765018178 0.272083759551 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119744892925 0.0996497079465 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128526596883 0.0662205650399 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260001589005 0.162205337803 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.244634482297 0.0443174109184 552% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.3589403974 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 53.8541721854 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.81 12.2367328918 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 63.6247240618 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.7273730684 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.498013245 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.