Titan VS Mars
The article and the lecture explore the prospects of future colonization of other parts in the solar system outside the planet earth. The writer of the article suggests that Saturn’s moon Titan will be a better option for colonization whereas the lecturer prefers Mars over Titan.
The writer claims that Titan and Earth have similar atmosphere so it will be more suitable for colonization. However, the lecturer asserts that regardless of the similarities in atmosphere, people will have to wear space suits to protect themselves from adverse conditions. Therefore, similar atmosphere of Titan does not make it an ideal option for colonization. Furthermore, the writer states that Titan has more resources such as methane, which could be used for propulsion but the lecturer claims that Mars may not have the same resources but it contains water, which is essential for life.
Additionally, the writer of the article states that Titan’s gravity is lower so it will be easier for the rockets to land. As a result, the lesser fuel will be spent to land or to take off from Titan. On the other hand, the lecturer asserts that lower gravity makes Titan less habitable and it negatively impacts human health. Lower gravity can result in heart complications.
Lastly, the writer claims that since lesser fuel would be needed to land on or take off from Titan, it will be easier to travel to Titan than to Mars, even though Titan is farther from Earth. The lecturer refutes the claim by stating that that the longer distance between Earth and Titan will disrupt communication. In addition, owing to the longer distance, it will be difficult to carry the necessary supplies to Titan. Hence the lecturer claims that since Mars is closer to Earth it will be a feasible option for colonization.
It is a debatable topic and both the groups will find it difficult to find common ground.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...he lecturer prefers Mars over Titan. The writer claims that Titan and Earth have...
^^^
Line 5, column 234, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: that
...e lecturer refutes the claim by stating that that the longer distance between Earth and T...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 422, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... carry the necessary supplies to Titan. Hence the lecturer claims that since Mars is ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, lastly, may, so, therefore, whereas, in addition, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 5.04856512141 277% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 30.3222958057 125% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1373.03311258 115% => OK
No of words: 317.0 270.72406181 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96214511041 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62712585266 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473186119874 0.540411800872 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 484.2 419.366225166 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2153316798 49.2860985944 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.866666667 110.228320801 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1333333333 21.698381199 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 7.06452816374 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215481595302 0.272083759551 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861109631955 0.0996497079465 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669857350161 0.0662205650399 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125752906478 0.162205337803 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069502815776 0.0443174109184 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.3589403974 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.8541721854 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.2367328918 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 63.6247240618 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.