TOEFL T P O 1 Integrated Writing Task

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TOEFL T P O 1 - Integrated Writing Task

The passage discusses several benefits of the 4-days working of employees rather than 5-days. The professor, on the other hand casts doubts on those benefits suggested, and provides his thoughts.

Firstly, the author describes that companies which provides the option to their employees, would gain an overall profit by decreasing 20 percent of the payment of 4-days employees. The professor contradicts for overall profit, and suggests that companies spend more money for training and medical insurance of their workers, as they need more employees for doing the same amount of work. Moreover, he states that increased employment would require more offices and computers, thus, the total cost increase dramatically.

Secondly, the passage suggests that overall unemployment rate would decrease, since offering the 4-days option would decrease overworking hours. However, the professor indicates that the compaines migth expect their workers to do the same amount of work in fewer days, in the fact that employees would find their current job unpleasant.

Thirdly, the passage expresses that fewer hours gives employees the chance to imporve themselves and spend more time with their families. The professor disagrees with improvement of the quality ot their lives. Additionally, he states that as most of the compaines offers management positions to their 5-days stuffs, they would not be able to be promoted from their current position.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 10.4613686534 19% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 22.412803532 103% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 30.3222958057 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 1373.03311258 91% => OK
No of words: 220.0 270.72406181 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65 5.08290768461 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64818665543 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 145.348785872 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.540411800872 109% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 419.366225166 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.55631563 49.2860985944 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.3 110.228320801 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 21.698381199 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06452816374 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.3589403974 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.8541721854 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.49 12.2367328918 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.42419426049 111% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 63.6247240618 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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