The reading and the lecture are both about the Torreya Taxifolia, an evergreen tree which started to die in Florida. The author of the reading feels that there are 3 ways for preventing this tree from death. The lecturer challenges this claims made by the author. She is of the opinion this way are not solution to the problem.
To begin with the author argues that Torreya lives in microclimate conditions that is cooler and damper than all of the nearby conditions. The article also mentions that scientists trying to plant Torreya on climmates like this. This specific argument is challenged by the lecturer. She claims that microclimates that the Torreya lived are changing and are not suitable. Additionally she says that global warming increased temperature in this places and microclimate’s conditions changed.
Secondly the writer suggests torreya can be transferred to the places other than its first place that its weather cooler as microclimate. In the article it is also said that Torreya in the past transferred to north and migrated by humans to its current areas. The lecturer however rebuts this by mentioning relocating Torreya can help it to survive but it would not be good for other plants in this area. She elaborates on this by bringing up the point that a tree named Black Locust transferred another area grow very fast spread qucily but it killed lots of plants in nearby areas which is endangered.
Finally the author posits that Torreya can can be growed in research centers in special environments for protecting and conducting researchs. Moreover it is stated in the article that with the help of this project they can ensure Torreya survival abilitys. In contrast the lecturers position is that in this environments Torreyas can not resist diseases and will increase genetically divorced. She notes that research centers do not have enough ability and place to help this species survive.
- Torreya Taxifolia tree decline and migration 76
- Pterosaurs were an ancient group of winged reptiles that lived alongside the dinosaurs. Many pterosaurs were very large, some as large as a giraffe and with a wingspan of over 12 meters. Paleontologists have long wondered whether large pterosaurs were cap 73
- Torreya Taxifolia tree decline and migration 80
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?For the successful development of a country, it is more important for a government to spend money on the education of very young children (five to ten years old) than to spend money on universities. Us 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ys for preventing this tree from death. The lecturer challenges this claims made by...
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...s way are not solution to the problem. To begin with the author argues that Tor...
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...nditions that is cooler and damper than all of the nearby conditions. The article also men...
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...ived are changing and are not suitable. Additionally she says that global warming increased ...
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...icroclimate's conditions changed. Secondly the writer suggests torreya can...
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...its first place that its weather cooler as microclimate. In the article it is also...
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...s in nearby areas which is endangered. Finally the author posits that Torreya c...
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...or protecting and conducting researchs. Moreover it is stated in the article that with t...
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...an ensure Torreya survival abilitys. In contrast the lecturers position is that in this ...
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...trast the lecturers position is that in this environments Torreyas can not resist di...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 22.412803532 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 30.3222958057 132% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1373.03311258 117% => OK
No of words: 317.0 270.72406181 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08517350158 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75502885652 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 145.348785872 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526813880126 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 419.366225166 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.221349494 49.2860985944 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8235294118 110.228320801 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6470588235 21.698381199 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76470588235 7.06452816374 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 4.19205298013 310% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183488092338 0.272083759551 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061694048252 0.0996497079465 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596552527943 0.0662205650399 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112669552818 0.162205337803 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319652840157 0.0443174109184 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.3589403974 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.8541721854 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.2367328918 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.42419426049 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 63.6247240618 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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