tp04 the arguments that prove dinosaurs are endotherms
The lecture apparently refutes the point illustrated in the reading material. According to the professor, there are problems with the arguments about the evidence that dinosaurs were endotherms. On the contrary, the reading contends an opposite stands that there are several proofs that dinosaurs are endotherms.
The first point the professor uses to cast doubt on the reading is that the temperature of the polar region in the dinosaur ages was warm enough for reptiles to survive, moreover, the dinosaurs could have migrated to warmer areas or hibernate during the cooler seasons, which differs from the statement in the reading that the evidence of fossils discovered in the polar region proves that dinosaurs can increase their body temperature above the surrounding temperature automatically.
Another evidence the speaker adopts to contradict the passage is that the position of the legs can support more bodyweight and enable dinosaurs to grow larger and take advantage of their massive size, which is unreasonable for the locations of the legs to prove that the dinosaurs are endotherms. However, the reading states that the location and movement of the dinosaurs’ legs that were placed underneath the body like endothermic animals nowadays show that they were endotherms as well.
In conclusion, the point made in the lecture contrasts with what is presented in the reading. As the professor claims, there are findings of growth rings of showing halt of growth during cold weather in the dinosaurs’ bones proves that there are not in the group of animals which are endotherms, whereas the reading material holds that the discovery of Haversian canals which are houses for nerves and blood vessels, and assist the animal to grow much rapidly in the dinosaurs’ bones prove it is the similar function of endothermic animals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, however, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 30.3222958057 139% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1373.03311258 113% => OK
No of words: 293.0 270.72406181 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30375426621 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74064621133 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 145.348785872 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501706484642 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 481.5 419.366225166 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 21.2450331126 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 152.680170209 49.2860985944 310% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 194.25 110.228320801 176% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.625 21.698381199 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.375 7.06452816374 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279339066507 0.272083759551 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107925780776 0.0996497079465 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697266345305 0.0662205650399 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162065544162 0.162205337803 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323366614835 0.0443174109184 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.8 13.3589403974 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 53.8541721854 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.0289183223 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.2367328918 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.42419426049 117% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 63.6247240618 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.498013245 156% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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