Both the reading and the lecture discuss the merits and demerits of working four-day a week instead of working five-days a week The writer focuses on the advantages of this plan and he provides three points of support. However, the professor refutes this idea and opposes each of the passage reasons.
First of all, the passage states that new policy of working four-day week will benefit the company itself as the employee will be rested and alert .Thus, it will decrease error in their work . However, the professor refutes this point by stating that this new policy will force the company to cost more money since the number of worker and trainer will increase ,that will leads to increase the cost of the medical insurances for them and purchasing new computers.This acutally cost the company more money.
Furthermore, the reading claims that new plan will be in favor of the employee because they will work less time for the same amount of money.On the other hand, the professor refutes this point by explaining that the new system will make the worker to work overtime as they will do more work at the end of the day .As a consequence, that will make the current job un pleasant for them.
Last but not least, the reading states that working four-day will improve the quality of the employees since they will have more time to spend with their families and do more activities.Nevertheless, the orator counteracts this idea by saying that this plan will decreas the quality of life and even more risks for them .Working less time will lower the chance of the job promotion and eventually the employees will lose their jobs.
As seen , the lecture refutes each point made in the reading.
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that will leads to increase
that will lead to increase
this plan will decreas the quality
this plan will decrease the quality
Sentence: However, the professor refutes this point by stating that this new policy will force the company to cost more money since the number of worker and trainer will increase ,that will leads to increase the cost of the medical insurances for them and purchasing new computers.This acutally cost the company more money.
Error: acutally Suggestion: actually
Sentence: Last but not least, the reading states that working four-day will improve the quality of the employees since they will have more time to spend with their families and do more activities.Nevertheless, the orator counteracts this idea by saying that this plan will decreas the quality of life and even more risks for them .Working less time will lower the chance of the job promotion and eventually the employees will lose their jobs.
Error: decreas Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
Don't put a space before punctuation marks. Always put a space after punctuation marks. Essay e-grader is sensitive. All error messages are due to punctuation marks.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 22 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 7 12
No. of Words: 296 250
No. of Characters: 1369 1200
No. of Different Words: 134 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.148 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.625 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.188 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 88 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 70 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 32 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 18 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 42.286 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 23.867 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.714 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.461 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.832 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.2 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 147, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...as the employee will be rested and alert .Thus, it will decrease error in their wo...
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Line 4, column 149, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
... the employee will be rested and alert .Thus, it will decrease error in their work ....
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Line 4, column 191, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...us, it will decrease error in their work . However, the professor refutes this poi...
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Line 4, column 362, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...mber of worker and trainer will increase ,that will leads to increase the cost of ...
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Line 4, column 465, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...s for them and purchasing new computers.This acutally cost the company more money. ...
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Line 6, column 142, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: On
... less time for the same amount of money.On the other hand, the professor refutes t...
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Line 6, column 313, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... will do more work at the end of the day .As a consequence, that will make the cur...
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Line 6, column 315, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...ill do more work at the end of the day .As a consequence, that will make the curre...
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Line 6, column 363, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sequence, that will make the current job un pleasant for them. Last but not le...
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Line 8, column 187, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Nevertheless
...h their families and do more activities.Nevertheless, the orator counteracts this idea by sa...
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Line 8, column 320, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ity of life and even more risks for them .Working less time will lower the chance ...
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Line 8, column 322, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Working
...y of life and even more risks for them .Working less time will lower the chance of the ...
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Line 10, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ployees will lose their jobs. As seen , the lecture refutes each point made in ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'thus', 'first of all', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.257234726688 0.261695866417 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.147909967846 0.158904122519 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0707395498392 0.0723426182421 98% => OK
Adverbs: 0.032154340836 0.0435111971325 74% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0385852090032 0.0277247811725 139% => OK
Prepositions: 0.128617363344 0.128828473217 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0385852090032 0.0370669169778 104% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.51450489089 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0128617363344 0.0208969081088 62% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.157556270096 0.128158765124 123% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0514469453376 0.0158828679856 324% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0064308681672 0.0114777025283 56% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1702.0 1645.83664459 103% => OK
No of words: 295.0 271.125827815 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.76949152542 6.08160592843 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.04852973271 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.308474576271 0.374372842146 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.237288135593 0.287516216867 83% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.128813559322 0.187439937562 69% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0576271186441 0.113142543107 51% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51450489089 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 145.348785872 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464406779661 0.539623497131 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 44.9503297613 53.8517498576 83% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 13.0529801325 54% => OK
Sentence length: 42.1428571429 21.7502111507 194% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 132.733583096 49.3711431718 269% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 243.142857143 132.220823453 184% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 42.1428571429 21.7502111507 194% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.42857142857 0.878197800319 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 3.39072847682 383% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 65.8716707022 50.5018328374 130% => OK
Elegance: 1.94117647059 1.90840788429 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.524675190994 0.549887131256 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.302202071961 0.142949733639 211% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.126983358908 0.0787303798458 161% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.889640692837 0.631733273073 141% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.124370736806 0.139662658121 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.339859068958 0.266732575781 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765154229437 0.103435571967 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.471590708399 0.414875509568 114% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.159289976955 0.0530846634433 300% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.373634791339 0.40443939384 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787341705544 0.0528353158467 149% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.26048565121 47% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.49668874172 114% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.62251655629 28% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.1766004415 63% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 10.2958057395 68% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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