The reading and lecture are both about a change in the work day of employees from a 5 to 4 day week job. The reading supports this claim as a benefit to the company, country and individual as a whole, but the lecture rebuts this change with ample evidences to buttress the points mentioned.
First of all, the article established the fact that an increase in the company profit will be attained if employees are given this option. Also, Employees are awaken and relieved thereby, inclined to less errors while working. hiring of staffs will lead to no additional payment constituting the company with few overworked employees with less error making.However, the lecture disagrees that this action will lead to extravagant spending which will affect the company's profit. In this process, more funds are spent on training of new workers as well as providing more space and computers which in turn reduces the profit of the company.
Furthermore, the author mentions that this plan will decrease the unemployment rate of the country since,the outstanding jobs can be allocated to other people to get the job completed, but the lecturer counters this point with proof that other options can be selected to achieve the aim of finishing the job by requesting that staffs work extra-time which will lead to less vacancy. the company expects that such individual with a 4 day job posses the potential to observe a 5 day job which results in less job creation
Finally, the article believes that this option can have quality benefit on the employees life by enhancing life. during free times, workers can spend extra time with family to create crucial memories and chase personal interests and enjoy leisure time as properly. On the other hand, the professor explicitly stated that this beak will lead to a drastic impact on the occupational life, also decreasing the job soundness giving room for little improvement. This affects the promotion of the worker because he or she does not meet some of the requirements to sustain and supervise the firm.
In conclusion, the lecture opines that this supposed change will bring about a decrease in company profit,country and employee's life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...day of employees from a 5 to 4 day week job. The reading supports this claim as a b...
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...s to buttress the points mentioned. First of all, the article established th...
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...e in the company profit will be attained if employees are given this option. Also...
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...urn reduces the profit of the company. Furthermore, the author mentions that th...
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...bring about a decrease in company profit,country and employees life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, so, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 5.04856512141 238% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 30.3222958057 155% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1824.0 1373.03311258 133% => OK
No of words: 363.0 270.72406181 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02479338843 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.04702891845 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67161960632 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 145.348785872 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534435261708 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 419.366225166 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 21.2450331126 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.4351731616 49.2860985944 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.0 110.228320801 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.25 21.698381199 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06452816374 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 4.19205298013 406% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246148073743 0.272083759551 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994924809476 0.0996497079465 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577997156037 0.0662205650399 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140052096152 0.162205337803 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362472758376 0.0443174109184 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.3589403974 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 53.8541721854 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.0289183223 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.42419426049 111% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 63.6247240618 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.498013245 133% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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