Some people believe that relating the truth is an approachable way to stabilize any relationship, but others believe that concealing the truth is better to sustain a relationship because the truth is better. In my opinion, I agree that truth is the best toll to maintain a good relationship with other people
First of all, trust is one of the most important factor that strengthens any kind of relationship. the truth may be bitter but needs to be unveiled to improve grater chances of attaining a strong relationship. For instance, I know of a couple who was constantly in grave shock for the wife's inability to get pregnant although the man had an affair which lead to the birth of his first son. This secret was strictly kept away from the wife, few years the later, the wife eventually found out which lead to a breakdown in the marital life of this couple.On the contrary, if the husband had been faithful and trustworthy, the family would have been stronger and unbreakable.
Furthermore, there is a maxim that 'the truth shall set you free'. some have the ideology that not revealing the truth protects the people in the relationship but i think it is a no brainer because such people are often placed in the darker by someone they love which in turn hurts the feeling. however this bold step to speak the truth builds confidence and faith with one another. this action also helps influence other peoples behavior in any association.
finally, sooth also known as truth used before the 12th century gives assurances that the relationship is worth taking risk for, it assures that the people involved are of good personality. a swell as the quality of the relationship.
In a nutshell, exposing the truth is significant to the wellbeing of the relationship which helps to enhance strength, confidence ,and assurance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, well, for instance, i think, kind of, first of all, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 312.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87179487179 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78885938806 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567307692308 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.3600181193 48.9658058833 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.666666667 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 5.45110844103 229% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143551513768 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586583216756 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468103657564 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.080773628376 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349990120811 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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