The reading passage says, the employees offer to working as 4 days’ instead of 5 days’ each day has some benefit for the company too, but the problem lecture says, is it makes force the company to pay more to train the new ones also it need more computers and not different between 4 days’ or 5 days’ working.
First, the company should pay 80 percent to 4 days’ workers, and save this money to hiring new people but it has an another problem because hiring is costly. On the other hand, the workers used to work on some jobs in 5 days’ but it’s hard to do all that in 4 days’. But they think it’s good for have more free time.
Second, they get much fewer salary but they think it’s improve their life and the can do whatever they like to do and enjoy it to do in their extra time, but the lecture says, it has some effect on their quality of their life and decrease the family time they have because they are too busy in that 4 days’
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'a problem' or 'another problem'.
Suggestion: a problem; another problem
...s money to hiring new people but it has an another problem because hiring is costly. On the other ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.4613686534 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 12.0772626932 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 30.3222958057 66% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.01324503311 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 815.0 1373.03311258 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 184.0 270.72406181 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42934782609 5.08290768461 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 4.04702891845 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31150830675 2.5805825403 90% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 145.348785872 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538043478261 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 419.366225166 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.51434878587 396% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 13.0662251656 38% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 21.2450331126 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.383393562 49.2860985944 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 163.0 110.228320801 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.8 21.698381199 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 7.06452816374 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246667756707 0.272083759551 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141510432686 0.0996497079465 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428327332717 0.0662205650399 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176793471847 0.162205337803 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289387288337 0.0443174109184 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.3589403974 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.86 53.8541721854 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.0289183223 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.01 12.2367328918 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.42419426049 90% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 63.6247240618 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.7273730684 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.498013245 156% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.2008830022 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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