he reading passage is about changing of time working in the U.S companies. Clerks work for 5 days a week for eight hours and many employees attempt to change it to 4 days in a week and get 80 percent ot their normal pay it should be optional.but the lecturer rejects this idea and says employees force to work 4 days in a week and it’s not optional because it can be wasting the time .
Firstly , the reading passage mentions the working four days cause decrease different unnecessary expenses and as a result company hire more people and it is useful for the company.also, company can spend 20 percent for other works such as hiring new clerks.the lecturer rejects this idea and says costs are the same and need more office spaces and computers because company will respect to all employees. In addition to, hiring new people is by far more expensive.
According to the reading passage employees won’t be tired and they have more motivation for innovating and working but the lecturer rebuts this claim and says it’s not possible because each clerk does his or her individual duties in company and hiring new people can be risky .
The reading passage is stated on working in 4 days are better because employees have more free time and they can do their personal things and spend more time with their family and use their free time as well . However, the lecturer rejects that and claims that employees will lose their promotion and maybe lose their jobs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
he reading passage is about changing of ti...
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Line 1, column 4, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'reads'.
Suggestion: reads
he reading passage is about changing of time worki...
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Line 1, column 63, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: S
...about changing of time working in the U.S companies. Clerks work for 5 days a wee...
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Line 1, column 303, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'working'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'force' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: working
...ects this idea and says employees force to work 4 days in a week and it's not opti...
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Line 1, column 389, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ional because it can be wasting the time . Firstly , the reading passage menti...
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Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...it can be wasting the time . Firstly , the reading passage mentions the workin...
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Line 5, column 286, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...mpany and hiring new people can be risky . The reading passage is stated on wo...
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Line 7, column 208, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...r family and use their free time as well . However, the lecturer rejects that and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, well, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 7.30242825607 288% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 12.0772626932 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 30.3222958057 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1221.0 1373.03311258 89% => OK
No of words: 256.0 270.72406181 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76953125 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42197471879 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 145.348785872 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515625 0.540411800872 95% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 419.366225166 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 13.0662251656 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 21.2450331126 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 122.868604117 49.2860985944 249% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 174.428571429 110.228320801 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.5714285714 21.698381199 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5714285714 7.06452816374 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416621865478 0.272083759551 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.186833281876 0.0996497079465 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112902220533 0.0662205650399 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260859977577 0.162205337803 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07179094819 0.0443174109184 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.3589403974 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.86 53.8541721854 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.0289183223 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.98 12.2367328918 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 63.6247240618 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 10.7273730684 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.498013245 156% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.2008830022 161% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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