Both reading and lecture taking about some employees need to work 4 days per week instead of 5 days per week.
First, the reading states that the companies that give chance to their employees to work four days instead of five days with just 80 percent of their salary, they can increase their profits due to employees could feeel relaxed and more aware. However the professor refutes this idea by saying that the companies will spend more and alot of money to hire employee and will sepnd more for traning and medical benifiets for the new employees. On the other hands, companies neeed to buy more computers and offer more space for add more offices. these addditions will cost the companies alot besides the companies will cut their profit.
Second the reading mentions that decrease the working hours to 4 days per week will creates more job offers to other employees to cover the rest of the work. Nevertheless, the professor questions this idea by saying that the companies can avoid the additional cost to hire new employees and, offer the employees who working 4 days per week to choose to work extra time so thses employees can do the same work of 5 days employees without hiring new employees.
Third the reading explains that the 4 days employees can save time for their family and social life. On the other, hand the professor disagrees with is idea by saying employees who work just 4 days they will decrease their quality of life. they may be lose their work. the maybe decrease their job stability. companies prefer to choose employees who work 5 days to continue supervision for entire week work.
Therefore, the professor questions all ideas mentioned in reading.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...s per week instead of 5 days per week. First, the reading states that the compa...
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'nevertheless', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'third', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.290322580645 0.261695866417 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.154838709677 0.158904122519 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0645161290323 0.0723426182421 89% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0354838709677 0.0435111971325 82% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0354838709677 0.0277247811725 128% => OK
Prepositions: 0.1 0.128828473217 78% => OK
Participles: 0.0225806451613 0.0370669169778 61% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.34585170333 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0451612903226 0.0208969081088 216% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0935483870968 0.128158765124 73% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0387096774194 0.0158828679856 244% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0161290322581 0.0114777025283 141% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1731.0 1645.83664459 105% => OK
No of words: 290.0 271.125827815 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.96896551724 6.08160592843 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.04852973271 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.3 0.374372842146 80% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.234482758621 0.287516216867 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.158620689655 0.187439937562 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.124137931034 0.113142543107 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34585170333 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 145.348785872 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.455172413793 0.539623497131 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 43.6176592199 53.8517498576 81% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0529801325 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.3076923077 21.7502111507 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.5517769872 49.3711431718 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.153846154 132.220823453 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 21.7502111507 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.846153846154 0.878197800319 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 3.39072847682 354% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 45.7559681698 50.5018328374 91% => OK
Elegance: 1.82857142857 1.90840788429 96% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.585769890839 0.549887131256 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.175074076607 0.142949733639 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.115577386626 0.0787303798458 147% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.661231796494 0.631733273073 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.214948628032 0.139662658121 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.264726180854 0.266732575781 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120620768203 0.103435571967 117% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.341345278807 0.414875509568 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.203384265966 0.0530846634433 383% => No any connections among paragraphs
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.346296967196 0.40443939384 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.167116334144 0.0528353158467 316% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.26048565121 141% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 3.49668874172 143% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.62251655629 28% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 6.0 3.1766004415 189% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.2958057395 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.