The article show that four days work is beneficial for employee and company in the role of improving work qualities and saving money for more employee. In contrast, the lecture argue differently as working four days a week will make the company lost more money than five days work on additional workers. Therefore, if worker work less they need to changes their requirement to meet the company's work.
The compensation for more extra weekend, in the article, it supports that the results of new policy is it will lower the cost of error tasks which make by hard work employee. However, the lecture oppose to the idea, even though it will lower the cost of employment because they can pay lesser to eighty percent of their common salary. It also require the company to hire more worker to do the remained works of those four days workers who left some tasks. The lecture disputes that they need to spend more money in more health insurances, work space, and computers. In compare, four day will wast more money than normal five days jobs
Four days work is beneficial from contribution of work and lower unemployment, from the article. In return, company will responsible for more payment in additional health care and resources like computers as mention above.
The article suggest that when worker have more free time, they tend to be more happy because they have chances to spend time for their life such as family. Conversely, the lecture tells that fewer works can decrease worker's capability to work on their tasks and it is harder to improve their quality, work experiences, and future promotion since company incline to chose higher experienced worker from five days worker than four day worker.
As there will be a lot of negative consequences in payment and employment quality, the lecture recommends two solutions and consideration for worker to keeping works to be done properly. The company need to ask their employee to work over time to make sure that their work will be finished on time if they work just four days a week.
- TPO-01 - Integrated Writing Task In the United States, employees typically work five days a week for eight hours each day. However, many employees want to work a four-day week and are willing to accept less pay inorder to do so. A mandatory policy requiri 73
- TPO-01 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.Use specific reaso 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The article show that four days work is ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...requirement to meet the companys work. The compensation for more extra weekend,...
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Line 2, column 346, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'requires'?
Suggestion: requires
...percent of their common salary. It also require the company to hire more worker to do t...
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Line 2, column 374, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'worker' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: worker
...ry. It also require the company to hire more worker to do the remained works of those four ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... more money than normal five days jobs Four days work is beneficial from contri...
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...urces like computers as mention above. The article suggest that when worker hav...
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'suggests'.
Suggestion: suggests
...uters as mention above. The article suggest that when worker have more free time, t...
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...ive days worker than four day worker. As there will be a lot of negative conse...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, however, if, so, therefore, in addition, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 5.04856512141 238% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 30.3222958057 145% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.01324503311 219% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 1373.03311258 123% => OK
No of words: 350.0 270.72406181 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83428571429 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.04702891845 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44572763681 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 145.348785872 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468571428571 0.540411800872 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 528.3 419.366225166 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 21.2450331126 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.7233441817 49.2860985944 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.153846154 110.228320801 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9230769231 21.698381199 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06452816374 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394740199127 0.272083759551 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171465022146 0.0996497079465 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830423425525 0.0662205650399 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260051116316 0.162205337803 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684386885826 0.0443174109184 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.3589403974 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.2367328918 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 63.6247240618 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.498013245 118% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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