Both the reading and the lecture are suggesting a plan to change the work policy from five-days a week to four days a week . The reading presents the merits of working four- days a week for economy as a whole ,companies, and individuals who decided to take the option. However, the professor casts doubts on all these claims and refutes each of the author's reasons.
Firstly, the reading claims that this new policy will increase company profit since the employees will feel rested and alert. The lecturer opposes this idea by explaining that hiring new workers will force the company to spend more money. The new worker will need training, medical insurance , office spaces, and more computers. As a result, these additional costs will decrease company profits.
Secondly, working four days will reduce the unemployment rate significantly. The workload of current employees will be shifted to new worker.Nevertheless, the professor refutes this idea and elaborates as follow. The company may ask current employees to work overtime. The company also might raise expection that the current worker will do the same work that they did in five days workweek. As a result, no additional job will be created.
Finally, the passage claims that this new policy will be beneficial for the worker as they will have extra time to spend with their family, pursuing special intersts,or enjoying activities. On the other hand, the professor disproves this idea by saying that this new policy may harm the employees future career and decrease their quality of life. Four days workers are the first ones to lose their job during economic downturn and passed over promotion as companies prefer full time workers for higher positions.
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Essay evaluation report
employees future career
employees' future careers
Sentence: The company also might raise expection that the current worker will do the same work that they did in five days workweek.
Error: expection Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Finally, the passage claims that this new policy will be beneficial for the worker as they will have extra time to spend with their family, pursuing special intersts,or enjoying activities.
Error: intersts Suggestion: interests
flaws:
Don't put a space before punctuation marks.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 23 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 15 12
No. of Words: 283 250
No. of Characters: 1400 1200
No. of Different Words: 151 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.102 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.947 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.369 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 108 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 76 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 43 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 27 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.867 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.089 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.733 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.33 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.544 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.074 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Both the reading and the lecture are sug...
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Line 1, column 126, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...rom five-days a week to four days a week . The reading presents the merits of work...
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Line 1, column 212, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...four- days a week for economy as a whole ,companies, and individuals who decided t...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...futes each of the authors reasons. Firstly, the reading claims that this ne...
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Line 4, column 230, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... workers will force the company to spend more money. The new worker will need tra...
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Line 4, column 296, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...er will need training, medical insurance , office spaces, and more computers. As a...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...costs will decrease company profits. Secondly, working four days will reduce ...
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Line 6, column 146, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Nevertheless
...employees will be shifted to new worker.Nevertheless, the professor refutes this idea and el...
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Line 6, column 207, Rule ID: AS_FOLLOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'as follows'?
Suggestion: as follows
...fessor refutes this idea and elaborates as follow. The company may ask current employees ...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., no additional job will be created. Finally, the passage claims that this ne...
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Line 8, column 169, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , or
... their family, pursuing special intersts,or enjoying activities. On the other hand,...
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Line 8, column 477, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...ssed over promotion as companies prefer full time workers for higher positions. ...
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Line 8, column 517, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...full time workers for higher positions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 5.04856512141 297% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 30.3222958057 73% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1373.03311258 105% => OK
No of words: 281.0 270.72406181 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14234875445 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62435952568 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533807829181 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 419.366225166 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.169087064 49.2860985944 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3333333333 110.228320801 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 21.698381199 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06452816374 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 4.19205298013 310% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361156902684 0.272083759551 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128536681478 0.0996497079465 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624473008905 0.0662205650399 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221415711132 0.162205337803 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432955835904 0.0443174109184 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.3589403974 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 63.6247240618 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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