TPO-04 - Integrated Writing Task Endotherms are animals such as modern birds and mammals that keep their body temperatures constant. For instance, humans are endotherms and maintain an internal temperature of 37°C, no matter whether the environment is wa
The reading and lecture are both about animals that are considered as endotherm. The author believes that dinosaurs were first not endotherms due to they are modern reptiles, but evidences were collected and shows that dinosaurs were in fact an endotherms. The lecturer cast doubts about the claims made in the artilce. She thinks that the data collected by the scientist proves that dinosaurs were not endotherms.
First of all, the author points out that dinosaurs are endotherms because they were discovered in polar regions. It is mentioned that if an animal can sustain a temperature beyond of its environment and live in a cold climate. The point is challenged by the lecturer. She says that the fossils found in the polar regions does not prove that dinosaurs were endotherms. Furthermore, she argues that polar dinosaurs if the season in the polar region is cold then they will migrate to warm environment or even hibernate.
Secondly, the the author contends that the physiology of the dinosaurs legs suggests that they are endothermy. The articles note that their legs are underneath their body and it allow sustained physical activity like running. The lecturer rebuts thus argument. She suggest that their legs under the body makes them to have high energy. She elaborates on this by mentioning that it support their weight and increase in their growth rate to its advantage and so endotherms does not need to run.
Finally, the author states that there is a clear connection between endothermy and bone structure. The article established their bones have Haversian canals which serves them to grow quickly, and rapid body growth so it is a clear sign that they are endothermy. The findings of the fossilized bones shows that they have haversian canals. The lecturer, on the other hand, posits that dinosaurs have haversian canals and growth rings which is the thickening of the bones. She puts forth the idea that the bones of the dinosaurs were not rapidly growing but in fact stop growing during the cooler period. The characteristics of rapid growth followed by slow growth of bones is not a feature of endotherms. The author also states that constant body temperature will result in rapid growth even if the environment is warm.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 243, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an endotherm' or simply 'endotherms'?
Suggestion: an endotherm; endotherms
...d and shows that dinosaurs were in fact an endotherms. The lecturer cast doubts about the cla...
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Line 1, column 258, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t dinosaurs were in fact an endotherms. The lecturer cast doubts about the claims m...
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Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... mentioned that if an animal can sustain a temperature beyond of its environment ...
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Line 3, column 204, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...emperature beyond of its environment and live in a cold climate. The point is cha...
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Line 5, column 11, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ronment or even hibernate. Secondly, the the author contends that the physiology of ...
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Line 5, column 11, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ronment or even hibernate. Secondly, the the author contends that the physiology of ...
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Line 5, column 179, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'allows'?
Suggestion: allows
...r legs are underneath their body and it allow sustained physical activity like runnin...
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Line 5, column 266, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'She' must be used with a third-person verb: 'suggests'.
Suggestion: suggests
... The lecturer rebuts thus argument. She suggest that their legs under the body makes th...
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Line 7, column 157, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lished their bones have Haversian canals which serves them to grow quickly, and r...
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Line 7, column 340, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... shows that they have haversian canals. The lecturer, on the other hand, posits tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, in fact, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 10.4613686534 210% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 23.0 12.0772626932 190% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 22.412803532 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 30.3222958057 129% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1883.0 1373.03311258 137% => OK
No of words: 374.0 270.72406181 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03475935829 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.04702891845 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61985289939 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 145.348785872 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465240641711 0.540411800872 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 574.2 419.366225166 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 14.0 8.23620309051 170% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 13.0662251656 161% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.65472904 49.2860985944 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6666666667 110.228320801 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8095238095 21.698381199 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61904761905 7.06452816374 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.502270269917 0.272083759551 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133591167409 0.0996497079465 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836578062444 0.0662205650399 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284417970006 0.162205337803 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551091216916 0.0443174109184 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.3589403974 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.8541721854 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.2367328918 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.42419426049 95% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 63.6247240618 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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