The article states that fuel cell- engines have several benefits over internal- combustion engines and will soon replace them. The author provides three reasons of supports. However, the professor states that though oil engines do have many drawbacks, such as finite resources, pollutions, the fuel-cell engines would not solve these problems. And she refutes each of the author’s reasons.
First, the reading avers that the hydrogen needed for fuel-cell engines cannot easily be depleted. Conversely, the professor states that the hydrogen is not available source as the author would like us to believe. She says water is not the direct source to get the hydrogen, but it derives from pure liquid state. This artifact is so difficult to produce and store. For example, in order to keep the pure liquid state, it should store in cold conditions, in particular a very highly temperature. This thing is hard to achieve with labs technology.
Second, the article claims that hydrogen-based fuel will solve the many of the world’s pollution problems. The professor refute this point by stating that fuel-cell engines will not solve pollution problems. According to the professor during the process of purification of the hydrogen, a highly energy will be needed, such as burning coal or oil. As a result, factories that responsible for producing the hydrogen will pollute the air and not by cars emit.
Third, the reading posits that fuel-cell engines will soon be economically competitive. The professor, on the other hand, opposes this point by saying that the hydrogen-based fuel is not cheap. She explains that during the manufacturing process, companies should use platinum element to undergoes the chemical reaction of the hydrogen to produce the energy. This platinum element is rare and so expensive. Also, she says when the companies use other elements to replace the expensive platinum, their attempts went unsuccessful.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 127, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'refutes'.
Suggestion: refutes
...pos;s pollution problems. The professor refute this point by stating that fuel-cell en...
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Line 5, column 293, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('highly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('energy') instead of another adjective.
...rocess of purification of the hydrogen, a highly energy will be needed, such as burning coal or...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, however, if, second, so, third, for example, in particular, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 5.04856512141 218% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1373.03311258 119% => OK
No of words: 306.0 270.72406181 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35947712418 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78570955224 2.5805825403 108% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 145.348785872 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532679738562 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 419.366225166 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 13.0662251656 145% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8647298952 49.2860985944 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3157894737 110.228320801 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1052631579 21.698381199 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78947368421 7.06452816374 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.443837956922 0.272083759551 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138254576305 0.0996497079465 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14451191935 0.0662205650399 218% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.280858736116 0.162205337803 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0791695064393 0.0443174109184 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.3589403974 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.2367328918 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 63.6247240618 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.