TPO-10 - Integrated Writing Task
The lecture and the article are about the causes of sea otters decline. The reading claims that the main cause of their decline is environmental pollution. However, the lecturer feels that attacks of predators have played main role in their decline.
First of all, no one can find any dead sea otter in the Alaskan coast area, so it is very difficult to find out the factors responsible for it. Moreover, the dead bodies of se otters can only be washed off the shore if they were killed by predators, pollutants caused there deaths can not clear off their dead bodies. While the author of the reading mentions that they are killed by the very known sources of pollution near Alaskan coast like oil rigs and other industrial chemical pollutions.
Secondly, the other sea mammals like whales from the coasts were disappeared because of the human hunters, so if the number of otters decreasing in the sea it must be due to the change in their diets. Probably easily occurring orcas are causing decline of all the sea mammals such as seals, sea otters and sea lions.
Thirdly, The lectures puts forth the idea that the predation theory have more impact on the decline of sea otters than the pollution theory. Furthermore ocars are so large that they can not access the shallow and rocky locations and these are the locations where sea otters are not declined. On the other hand reading states that sea otters are greatly declined in some areas while stable on others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 388, Rule ID: VERY_KNOWN[1]
Message: Incorrect phrase. Use 'very well-known' or 'well-known' instead.
Suggestion: very well-known; well-known
...ng mentions that they are killed by the very known sources of pollution near Alaskan coast...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 142, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...f sea otters than the pollution theory. Furthermore ocars are so large that they can not ac...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1217.0 1373.03311258 89% => OK
No of words: 256.0 270.72406181 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75390625 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29045859197 2.5805825403 89% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 145.348785872 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5546875 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 419.366225166 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5654077144 49.2860985944 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.636363636 110.228320801 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2727272727 21.698381199 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6363636364 7.06452816374 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.449249366968 0.272083759551 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173563995084 0.0996497079465 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644203350126 0.0662205650399 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265630606154 0.162205337803 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604793782808 0.0443174109184 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.3589403974 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.8541721854 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.2367328918 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 63.6247240618 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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