TPO-10 - Integrated Writing Task The sea otter is a small mammal that lives in waters along the western coast of North America from California to Alaska. When some sea otter populations off the Alaskan coast started rapidly declining a few years ago, it c
The reading and the lecture are both about the small mammal sea otter. The author of the reading believes that population of the sea otter decline due to 2 main reason which is pollution and attacks by the predators. However, the lecturer casts doubts the claims made in the article and refutes all the theories presented in the reading passage.
First of all, the author points out that in Alaskan coast number of sea otter drastically declined due to industrial chemical pollution. It is mentioned in the article that the water samples taken shows that there are harmful chemicals like oil, thus causing harm to the health of sea otter which can contribute to their death. The point is challenged by the lecturer. He says that evidence suggests that pollution is not the cause of the death of sea otter, thus pointing out that there has no proof of infection in this creature. Furthermore, he argues that the drop in its population is consistent with predation.
Secondly, the author contends that ecosystem in the Alaskan coast is declining, thus, when other sea creatures are affected by marine pollution means the entire community will be affected.The article notes that some species like Orca likes to much larger prey, such as whales. However, the lecturer rebuts this argument. He suggests that Orca has to change its diet in order to survive. He elaborates on this by mentioning that there are declining in marine animals, so, Orca did not prey on whales but rather preyed on sea lions instead.
Finally, the author states that pollution hypothesis explains the uneven pattern of the decline in population of otter. The article establishes that in some areas there are drop in the population whereas others remained the same. The lecturer, on the other hand, posits that Orca's prediction rather than pollution is the cause of decline in population in sea otter. He puts forth the idea that Orca can be easily located on the shallow rocky portion of Alaskan Coast and there is no evidence in Sea lion decline.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 189, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...s the entire community will be affected.The article notes that some species like Or...
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Line 5, column 438, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tes on this by mentioning that there are declining in marine animals, so, Orca di...
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Line 7, column 174, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'drops'?
Suggestion: drops
...stablishes that in some areas there are drop in the population whereas others remain...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, however, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, as to, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 12.0772626932 157% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 30.3222958057 162% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 5.01324503311 359% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1373.03311258 123% => OK
No of words: 343.0 270.72406181 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92128279883 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48822845492 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 145.348785872 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504373177843 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 524.7 419.366225166 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4140662207 49.2860985944 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 110.228320801 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4375 21.698381199 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 7.06452816374 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 4.45695364238 179% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.425273013923 0.272083759551 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135397544305 0.0996497079465 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0963309486538 0.0662205650399 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260867626793 0.162205337803 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674273368291 0.0443174109184 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.3589403974 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.8541721854 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.2367328918 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 63.6247240618 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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