tpo 11 integrated
Culture consumption is changing, and there is nothing bad about this according to the professor. In contrast, the passage states that reading less literature will decrease youngsters intellectual skills.
Even though novel reading can exercise people’s imagination, the professor claims that there are other books that can also stimulate your brain and creativity such as science and history. These books are also great examples of good reading to improve the use of language and idioms, contradicting the theory presented in the article.
Furthermore, the reading emphasizes that people are wasting their time with music and TV instead of reading literature books, implying that youth culture is not sophisticated. The lecturer disagrees and points out that these other forms of media can also be a rich fountain of culture; so they are not less valuable at all.
Finally, the article implies that although there are very good writers, there is a lack of audience that will cause a big impact on this market. Nevertheless, the professor argues that point is the author’s fault. Modern literature is usually full of fancy and old words that/which can be really hard to understand and not interesting for the young generation. The professor even claims that readers from the past might not be interested to read “modern” literature.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 306, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f language and idioms, contradicting the theory presented in the article. Fu...
^^
Line 13, column 82, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun audience seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lack of audiences'.
Suggestion: a lack of audiences
...h there are very good writers, there is a lack of audience that will cause a big impact on this ma...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, nevertheless, really, so, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 30.3222958057 66% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1154.0 1373.03311258 84% => OK
No of words: 213.0 270.72406181 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41784037559 5.08290768461 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.04702891845 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97669613411 2.5805825403 115% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 145.348785872 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619718309859 0.540411800872 115% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 419.366225166 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5137653698 49.2860985944 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.4 110.228320801 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3 21.698381199 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06452816374 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302125606724 0.272083759551 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108616119153 0.0996497079465 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811149481548 0.0662205650399 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183999568114 0.162205337803 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556771413592 0.0443174109184 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.3589403974 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.8541721854 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.2367328918 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 63.6247240618 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.