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TPO 17 - Integrated TOEFL essay
In this set of materials, the reading passage states that the population of the birds is affected by some factors resulting from human population growth. However, the lecturer finds all the ideas unconvincing and provides some evidence to refute them all.
First, the author of the passage claims that growing human populations and settlements along with expanding urban areas have destroyed the birds' habitats. On the contrary, the lecturer declares that although urban development has reduced the number of some types of the birds, it has created better and larger habitat for the oth...
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Score: 27 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 12
No. of Words: 287 250
No. of Characters: 1498 1200
No. of Different Words: 161 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.116 4.2
Average Word Length: 5.22 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.634 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 108 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 87 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 59 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 41 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.077 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.917 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.846 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.36 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.584 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.103 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4