The artcile has mentioned about the three possibe solutions to prevent the Torreya taxifoila from being extinct. However, the professor believes that none of the proposed solution gives saisfactory result and refute each of the soultion.
First, the article discuss about the solution where Torreya reestablsih in the same lication in which they thrived for thousands if years. The location where smaller egion is cooler and wetter than surrounding region The professor thinks that this approach is not sufficient and cast doubt on it. He further explains that coolest smaller region is surrounded by larger region and this larger region affect the smaller region due to global warming. Area around the the smaller region becomes drier. SO current atmospheric situation is no t suitable for gwoth of Torreya.
Second, the artcile disuss about the approach where Torreya is grown in enitiely different location.The professor states that assisted migration gives the outcome which are unpredictable. To discount this approach, the professor has given the exmple of another plant black lotus which was grown using assisted migration appraoch. The professor further explains that the black lotus grown so quickly that it kills another tress, among these tree many of where endangered species itseilf.
Third, the article discuss about the approach where Torreya were presever in reseach centeres. However, the professor thinks that it's not the solution either. To refute this point, the professor explains about the condition of plants resistance to disease. The professor states that the trees which were grown in reseach centere were not ablt to resist disease. To resist disesase trees should be in large quantity and should be diverse and reseach centers are not able to provide such condition.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ooler and wetter than surrounding region The professor thinks that this approach ...
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...gion due to global warming. Area around the the smaller region becomes drier. SO curren...
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...gion due to global warming. Area around the the smaller region becomes drier. SO curren...
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...is grown in enitiely different location.The professor states that assisted migrati...
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...grown in enitiely different location.The professor states that assisted migration...
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... Third, the article discuss about the approach where Torreya were presever in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.01324503311 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1373.03311258 111% => OK
No of words: 281.0 270.72406181 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41992882562 5.08290768461 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45095248743 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 145.348785872 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526690391459 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 419.366225166 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.23620309051 146% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7529984093 49.2860985944 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.533333333 110.228320801 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 21.698381199 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46666666667 7.06452816374 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250818654323 0.272083759551 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891770092078 0.0996497079465 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593251318206 0.0662205650399 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149105171289 0.162205337803 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419235912826 0.0443174109184 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.3589403974 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.2367328918 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 63.6247240618 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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