TPO-18 - Integrated Writing Task
The reading claims that terreya is one of the evergreen trees which are extincting in the states of the florida. The author elaborates his viewpoints by providing three main reasons to maintain the terreya from extinction. Nevertheless, the professor believes that none of the providing solution are satisfying and refutes each of the author's concepts.
First, the reading asserts that reestablishing option of these trees in the same location and states that Northern florida's as the best locate for favorable microclimate. However, the professor refutes this view by stating that it's unlikely to become successful; hence, the global warming alter this area remarkably warmer than 1000 years ago. Since these trees require cold and dampt area, she indicates that drier wethear in this area are becoming widespread as the cause of the less surviving in the environment.
Furthermore, the article avers that move terreya trees to different location which similar to ancient period and microclimate of this trees. On the other hand, the professor brings the fact that this significant changes could be harmful for the entire ecosystem. She states example of black Yoks trees as the negative experience; hence, it spread so quickly on different areas by siecntist and impose other plants to extinced and numerous negative consequence which cause by mentioned trees.
Finally, the artice posits that preserving terreya in lab and research center in order to maintan this kind. On the contrary, the professor casts doubt on this claim by stating that it not perfect solution since these trees not able to resist from diseas if it plant in the artificial environment. In addition, states that large areas and diversity as two essential requirements for these trees which can't afford by research centers. Not sufficient capacity and variety are the cause that these trees will not servive from diseas.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 297, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ves that none of the providing solution are satisfying and refutes each of the authors concept...
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Line 5, column 130, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...r to ancient period and microclimate of this trees. On the other hand, the professor...
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Line 7, column 262, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'plants'?
Suggestion: plants
...es not able to resist from diseas if it plant in the artificial environment. In addit...
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Line 7, column 402, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...tial requirements for these trees which cant afford by research centers. Not suffici...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, in addition, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 22.412803532 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 30.3222958057 125% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1373.03311258 116% => OK
No of words: 302.0 270.72406181 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29470198675 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66992567983 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 145.348785872 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546357615894 0.540411800872 101% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 419.366225166 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0833061853 49.2860985944 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 110.228320801 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 21.698381199 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06452816374 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196330346366 0.272083759551 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722113806537 0.0996497079465 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351258873345 0.0662205650399 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116517522276 0.162205337803 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323512105865 0.0443174109184 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.3589403974 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.8541721854 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.2367328918 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.42419426049 113% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 63.6247240618 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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