Tpo 25
electicity cylinder
The passage provides us some information about the clay jars which have been founded in Iraq by local people. The article states that these jars contain some copper and iron cylinders. The writer of the reading claims that the function of these jars could not be electricity batteries and provides three reasons of support. On the other hand the lecturer refutes all the reasons and holds an opposite opinion.
First, the passage asserts that some electricity conductors and wires should be found next to the jars, if they were batteries in ancient world. The professor challenges this idea by saying that the jars have been discovered by local people who are not trained enough. they might find wires, but wires or conductors are not interesting for them to pay attention to them.
Second, the article explained that the copper cylinders are very similar to discovered copper cylinder in an ancient location nearby. it is likely; they have same function, for holding scrolls. The lecturer argues that, it is likely, people had found another application for the copper cylinders in conjunction with iron cylinders and theses kind of jars were original of that region.
Third, the reading claims that ancient people did not have any devices to apply electricity and supposition of battery for them is not reasonable. The professor opposes this explanation as well. She said that maybe they function of the jars were different. For example, ancient people could use them healing or relieve the muscles' pain. another usage could be showing people that they have magical powers since the jars could shock people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 186, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...contain some copper and iron cylinders. The writer of the reading claims that the f...
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Line 5, column 270, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...ocal people who are not trained enough. they might find wires, but wires or conducto...
^^^^
Line 9, column 135, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...cylinder in an ancient location nearby. it is likely; they have same function, for...
^^
Line 13, column 338, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Another
...em healing or relieve the muscles pain. another usage could be showing people that they...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, third, well, for example, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 22.412803532 120% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 30.3222958057 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1373.03311258 99% => OK
No of words: 265.0 270.72406181 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12830188679 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42396366672 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 145.348785872 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532075471698 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 419.366225166 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3848349685 49.2860985944 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6 110.228320801 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 21.698381199 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06452816374 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.411614324343 0.272083759551 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127919456402 0.0996497079465 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597078500653 0.0662205650399 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246560913528 0.162205337803 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547643157432 0.0443174109184 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.3589403974 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.2367328918 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 63.6247240618 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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