TPO 27
the article states that how little ice age happened , and provide three reasons of support .however the professor explains that these reasons are out of date and new informations are reported.
first, the reading claims that disrupting ocean current in gulf stream from cold water of melted glaciers chang the climate . the professor refutes this point by saying that golf stream only affect nourth america and europe while newziland and southafrica not affected ,and so this reason not explain the changes in that areas .
second, the article posits that volcanic eruptions form alarg dark cloud interrupt sunlight to reach surface.the professor says that the volcanic eruptions were not strong enough to produce this huge amoun of dust because no report support other changes happened like chang color of sunlight or snow from dust.
third , the reading says that low human population lead to decrease disruption of trees ,so increasing number of trees cause more co2 absorbtiona and cooler climate,t. the professor opposes this point by explaining that there were no enought time for this to work since trees shortly cut to produce crops to human benefit.
- tpo 8 3
- TPO14-Task2Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
- TPO14 integrated writing: Salvage logging 80
- TPO10 - decreasing in otter population 83
- TPO13: The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past. 63
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, second, so, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.4613686534 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 30.3222958057 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 975.0 1373.03311258 71% => OK
No of words: 186.0 270.72406181 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24193548387 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 4.04702891845 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38046062723 2.5805825403 92% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 145.348785872 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.540411800872 123% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 419.366225166 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 13.0662251656 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 21.2450331126 146% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.5680990149 49.2860985944 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.5 110.228320801 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 21.698381199 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06452816374 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 4.19205298013 334% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22961999247 0.272083759551 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108563822705 0.0996497079465 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375855229897 0.0662205650399 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125970194074 0.162205337803 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241144445839 0.0443174109184 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.3589403974 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 53.8541721854 74% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.0289183223 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.2367328918 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.42419426049 108% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 63.6247240618 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.498013245 137% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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