tpo 27
according to what the professor said, the causes that passage mentioned those, are out of dated and today scientist could explore new reasons for the little ice age. first, disrupting of ocean current can not be an exact reason for the little ice age because that happened in the specific area, not in every where, that was not exactly some where that we know. second, it can be true that volcanic eruption have caused the little ice age if that was so strong. I mean dark clouds of dust and sulfur gas that volcanoes erupt send to in the atmosphere be strong enough that prevent sun light to reach to the earth but today, we know volcanoes erupt was not simply strong enough. third, substantial decrease in human populations may have contributed indirectly to cooling of the climate but according to what we know today, there was not enough time for working it that causes to cooling climate and we know, growing crops by human need to carbon dioxide that make earth cooler by absorbing carbon dioxide.
- In the 1950s Torreya Taxifoha, a type of evergreen tree once very common in the state of Florida, started to die out. No one is sure exactly what caused the decline, but chances are good that if nothing is done, Torreya will soon become extinct. Experts a 70
- In the past century the steady growth of the human population and the corresponding increase in agriculture and pesticide use have caused much harm to wildlife in the United States birds in particular Unfortunately for birds these trends are likely to con 80
- TPO 30
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only do what they know how to do well. 60
- Animal fossils usually provide very little opportunity to study the actual animal tissues, because in fossils the animals' living tissues have been largely replaced by minerals. Thus, scientists were very excited recently when it appeared that a 70-m 40
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: According
according to what the professor said, the causes ...
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Line 1, column 167, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: First
...ore new reasons for the little ice age. first, disrupting of ocean current can not be...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 303, Rule ID: EVERY_WHERE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'everywhere'?
Suggestion: everywhere
...t happened in the specific area, not in every where, that was not exactly some where that w...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 337, Rule ID: SOME_WHERE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'somewhere'?
Suggestion: somewhere
...ot in every where, that was not exactly some where that we know. second, it can be true th...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 362, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Second
...as not exactly some where that we know. second, it can be true that volcanic eruption ...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 678, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Third
...oes erupt was not simply strong enough. third, substantial decrease in human populati...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, third, i mean
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 30.3222958057 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 1373.03311258 60% => OK
No of words: 177.0 270.72406181 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68926553672 5.08290768461 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 4.04702891845 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26118606731 2.5805825403 88% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 145.348785872 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604519774011 0.540411800872 112% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 419.366225166 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 13.0662251656 38% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 21.2450331126 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.2466160845 49.2860985944 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.0 110.228320801 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.4 21.698381199 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06452816374 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.09492273731 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416413491496 0.272083759551 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.228141821681 0.0996497079465 229% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783365526872 0.0662205650399 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.416413491496 0.162205337803 257% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.3589403974 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 53.8541721854 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.0289183223 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.2367328918 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.42419426049 107% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 63.6247240618 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.7273730684 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.498013245 152% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.2008830022 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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