TPO 27
In the reading passage, the author claims that there are three viable explanations for the occurring of the little ice age, which occurred approximately form 1350 to 1900CE. However, finding all the ideas implausible and questionable, the professor casts doubt on what is presented in the lecture and stated that the theories mentioned in the passage were based on outdated information and none of these reasons can be accounted as a cause associated with this phenomenon
At first, the author argues that the glaciers were melted due to unprecedented warm weather which sent the enormous amount of cold streams into the Gulf Stream which ended up with cooling the ephemeral alteration in global climate. On the other hand, the lecturer brings up the idea that this theory merely clarifies the changes related to the Europe and North of United States. Whereas, the climate change widely happened in southern Hemisphere including News land and South Africa, as well. Nonetheless, there is not any justification for the cool climate in these areas.
In addition, the reading passage holds the view that blocking the sunlight by the gasses coming from volcanic eruption caused the decreasing in global temperatures. The professor disputes this idea by clarifying that it is true that severe volcanic eruption can emit massive gasses into the atmosphere, but there are some other visual indications when this phenomenon occur. For instance, colorful sunlight or gray and brown snow instead of the white snow. But the fact is none of these signs were reported by the people lived in that era of time nonetheless. Consequently, this theory could not have caused a substantial drop in global temperature.
Finally, the author asserts that a dramatic decline in human population within that period by alleviating the greenhouse effect indirectly affected global climate. The professor, thought, dismisses this idea by subscribing the fact that the human population abruptly started to grow; thus they cut down trees to prepare sufficient food for the increasing growth population. Indeed, they required their farmland to cultivate crops. Furthermore, the forest only can bring such impact on the global climate if only it lasts for a long time, though we know that the trees quickly had been substituted by the fields.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, nonetheless, so, thus, well, whereas, for instance, in addition, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 22.412803532 120% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 30.3222958057 145% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1945.0 1373.03311258 142% => OK
No of words: 371.0 270.72406181 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24258760108 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.04702891845 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72547926535 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 145.348785872 154% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603773584906 0.540411800872 112% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 419.366225166 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 21.2450331126 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.232834695 49.2860985944 228% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 138.928571429 110.228320801 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 21.698381199 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0714285714 7.06452816374 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285412163221 0.272083759551 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772682973473 0.0996497079465 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520367371552 0.0662205650399 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147563713782 0.162205337803 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211440032863 0.0443174109184 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.3589403974 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.8541721854 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.0289183223 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.2367328918 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.42419426049 113% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 63.6247240618 170% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 10.7273730684 275% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.498013245 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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