The article explains three reasons that caused the Little Ice Age to happen which is proposed by the scientists. However, the professor explains that unfortunately all the information that is presented by the author are out of date and refutes each of the reasons.
First, the reading claims that the disruption of ocean currents caused the cooling of the weather. Because before the Ice Age there was a period of unusually warm weather that melted the glaciers. The professor opposes this point by saying that this effect only caused the weather in Europe and North America to become cold. He states that sudden hemisphere cannot affect the weather in southern parts of the Earth. Thus it cannot be the true explanation.
Second, the author declares that the volcanic eruption sends dark clouds of dust and sulfur gas to the atmosphere and caused the Little Ice Age. Nevertheless, the professor contends that if that amount of dust were released in the atmosphere, it would produce a visual effect which people could see it. For instance, the sunset would be colorful or the snow would be brown or gray. According to the professor, there was no report about such changes.
Third, the article avers that substantial decrease in human population may have contributed in the cooling of the climate as the number of trees that were caught by the human decrease and forest trees started to grow and they absorb the carbon dioxide which makes the Earth warm. The professor refutes this point by stating that it is true that there was a time that the human population decreased but the population of them start to grow back quickly and there was not enough time for such a decrease in the amount of carbon dioxide to make the weather cold. Based on the lecture when the population grows again they started to cut the trees again and the effect was not long enough to result in global effect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 100, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ents caused the cooling of the weather. Because before the Ice Age there was a period o...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 417, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...weather in southern parts of the Earth. Thus it cannot be the true explanation. S...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, third, thus, as to, for instance, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 12.0772626932 157% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 30.3222958057 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1373.03311258 114% => OK
No of words: 326.0 270.72406181 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81901840491 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38775851344 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 145.348785872 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503067484663 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 475.2 419.366225166 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.1581668935 49.2860985944 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.214285714 110.228320801 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 21.698381199 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06452816374 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.411613778813 0.272083759551 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123287226757 0.0996497079465 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0976400595148 0.0662205650399 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206595663277 0.162205337803 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452936260451 0.0443174109184 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.3589403974 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.8541721854 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.2367328918 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.42419426049 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 63.6247240618 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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