TPO 32
In this set of materials, the reading passage discusses that several theories about the possible sources that might be caused by the odd sounds. While in the listening the professor casts doubt on what is presented in the text and believes that "Quackers" sound is a very strange phenomenon and the actual cause of this phenomenon is not identified. But the suggested reason in the text is not convincing.
First of all, in the text, it is clearly mentioned that this sound creates by whales. However, the professor claims that at first, this theory seems reasonable. But, it is highly unlikely that this sound produced by whales. Because the area is where for petrol extraction and whales need to come to surface water for birthing. Thus, these whales should be could detected by submarines sonar.
In addition, the professor disagrees with this idea that this sound produced by the giant squid. Because this strange sound appeared first in the 1960 and disappeared in the 1990 decays. Therefore,it is incredible that these invertebrates animals caused this sound in one decay and suddenly this sound disappear for two decades.
Finally, in the text, it is stated that the sound may be emitted by the foreign submarine unintentionally. The professor subscribes that this sound change direction very quickly. And there is not a technology that can produce sound in one direction and change it's direction quickly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 116, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s about the possibily sources that might caused the odd sounds. While in the list...
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Line 2, column 361, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'detect'
Suggestion: detect
...ing. Thus, these whales should be could detected by submarines sonar. In addition, ...
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Line 2, column 369, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s, these whales should be could detected by submarines sonar. In addition, th...
^^
Line 2, column 374, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'submarines'' or 'submarine's'?
Suggestion: submarines'; submarine's
...ese whales should be could detected by submarines sonar. In addition, the professsor ...
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Line 4, column 28, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s sonar. In addition, the professsor dis agrees with this idea that this soun...
^^
Line 4, column 198, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
... appeared in the 1990 decays. Threrefore,it is incredible that these invertebrates ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, may, so, thus, while, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 22.412803532 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 30.3222958057 82% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1178.0 1373.03311258 86% => OK
No of words: 230.0 270.72406181 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12173913043 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64812235081 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 145.348785872 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539130434783 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 419.366225166 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7670761486 49.2860985944 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1428571429 110.228320801 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4285714286 21.698381199 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 7.06452816374 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216655578292 0.272083759551 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852713306276 0.0996497079465 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516987170762 0.0662205650399 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13759126175 0.162205337803 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253013634282 0.0443174109184 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.3589403974 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.8541721854 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 63.6247240618 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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