TPO 32
In the reading passage, the author claims that there are three viable hypothesises regarding the sourceof quackers, which is a wierd sound which were heared by the sailors in Russian submarines. However, finding all the ideas implausible and questionable, the professor casts doubt on what is presented in the text and states in spite of the fact that the principal reason for such this strange phenomenon is still a contentious issuee, there are serious problems concerning the mentioned theories.
At first, the author argues that the quackers are in fact the ocra whales sound which are in countership ritual. Conversely, the lecturer contend the idea that this assumption() is enterly unlikely. Having lived on the surface of ocean, ocras' sound could not have been detected by the Russian submarines moved deep in ocean. Moreover, if there were some ocras in that area, the sonar would had been able to detect it, but this occurance did not happen nonethelless.
In addition, the reading passage holds the view that giant squid would have produced this strange sound. On the other hand, the professor dimisses this idea by claryfing the fact that indeed, the presence of this giant marine invertebrates was endorsed in 1960 for two decades. The problem is the sound disapeared suddenly, while the squids were still living in that rigion. Therefore, if the source of quckers was the squid, it would have been continued thereafter.
Finally, the author asserts that the sound is related to another submarine attributing to different country equiped with technology that had made it undetective. The professor, thought, diputes this point by subsrbing the point that the source of the sound not only moved around the Russian submarin but also alter its direction so rapidly. Furthermore, the engine of the submarine produces noticeable sound. Subsequently, this theory is unconvincing as weel since the submarine that is capable to move with such fast pace with silent engine has not been invented yet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, still, therefore, while, in addition, in fact, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 10.4613686534 201% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 30.3222958057 115% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1373.03311258 123% => OK
No of words: 325.0 270.72406181 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18153846154 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65075449793 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 145.348785872 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566153846154 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 419.366225166 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.23620309051 146% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5115111647 49.2860985944 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.285714286 110.228320801 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2142857143 21.698381199 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9285714286 7.06452816374 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3440830186 0.272083759551 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122822612295 0.0996497079465 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730089208011 0.0662205650399 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201615305803 0.162205337803 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739924964627 0.0443174109184 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.3589403974 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.8541721854 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.2367328918 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.42419426049 110% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 63.6247240618 146% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.7273730684 177% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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