TPO 40
The professor explains three clear arguments opposing the points stated in the reading passage about the possibility of humans' permanent residency in Venus and rejects all of the claims that consider Mars and Moon as a more hospitable planets than Venus.
First of all, the professor argues that atmospheric pressure of Venus, which is 90 times greater than Earth's pressure and destroys everything, can be solved by building a station in 50 kilometers higher than Venus surface. This station can be flow by balloon and atmospheric pressure in mentioned height is equal to Earth because pressure and height have negative relationship with each other; the more height the less pressure.
Second of all, the reading passage states that Venus' surface lacks of any water reservoirs which are critical for humans' live. Furthermore, Venus' atmosphere is more consist of elements like nitrogen, carbon dioxide and sulfuric acid instead of oxygen, therefore, humans' should transfer sufficient amount of water and oxygen in order to be able to live in Venus. However, the professor argues against this idea and stated that using some chemical processes, we can transform elements in Venus' atmosphere to oxygen and other useful elements. So, we don't need to import water and oxygen from Earth to Venus.
Third of all and last, although the reading passage asserts that more than 60 percent of sunlight that hits Venus is reflected back into atmosphere and only 40 percent of it absorb by Venus surface because of thick clouds, professor believes that clouds are not very thick and station can use sunlight energy as well as reflected lights to manufacture electricity. So, solar power cells can provide sufficient electricity for humans' daily activity.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 3
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- TPO 42 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 169, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ermanent residency in Venus and rejects all of the claims that consider Mars and Moon as a...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 548, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...xygen and other useful elements. So, we dont need to import water and oxygen from Ea...
^^^^
Line 7, column 127, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of sunlight that hits Venus is reflected back into atmosphere and only 40 percent...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, second, so, therefore, third, well, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 22.412803532 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 30.3222958057 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1373.03311258 107% => OK
No of words: 281.0 270.72406181 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23487544484 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55917665266 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 145.348785872 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562277580071 0.540411800872 104% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 419.366225166 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 21.2450331126 146% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.8455434622 49.2860985944 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.444444444 110.228320801 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2222222222 21.698381199 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.88888888889 7.06452816374 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.442038664748 0.272083759551 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185999594488 0.0996497079465 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604041792285 0.0662205650399 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252097559119 0.162205337803 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554300512436 0.0443174109184 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.3589403974 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 53.8541721854 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.0289183223 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.2367328918 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.42419426049 108% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 63.6247240618 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 10.7273730684 182% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.498013245 137% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.