tpo 40
The lecture and the reading both discuss the possiplity of life in Venus. On the first hand, the reading states that the conditions on Venus make the human life impossible with three reason of suggest. On the other hand, the lecture suggest a solution for this proplem that mentioned in the reading passage by establish a station flooded on the Venus atomesphere.
First of all, the reading claims that atmospheric pressure at Venus' surface is greater than the preassure at Earth’s surface. However, the lecture argues that the station will be at 50 kilometers highest aboth the Venus surface this will make the pressure on the station equall that on the Earth.
In addition, the reading makes the argument is that the none reservoirs of water and oxygen on Venus’ surface and the planet’s atmosphere make the life impossible as well. The lecture counter this point by saying that this is a well known phisical proplem and can be solved by produced water and oxygen on the station by using carbon dioxide, nitrogen, and sulfuric acid which easely obtained in Venus.
Lastly, the reading argues that the thick clouds that fill the atmosphere reflect back the sunlight to reach the planet's surface. The lecture refutes this claim by pointing out that the station will absorb this sunlight reflected by thick clouds.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 81, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ent is that the none reservoirs of water and oxygen on Venus' surface and th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, lastly, so, well, in addition, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 22.412803532 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1117.0 1373.03311258 81% => OK
No of words: 221.0 270.72406181 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05429864253 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48979818914 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 145.348785872 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488687782805 0.540411800872 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 336.6 419.366225166 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.539161333 49.2860985944 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.111111111 110.228320801 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5555555556 21.698381199 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11111111111 7.06452816374 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311181464913 0.272083759551 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141283484514 0.0996497079465 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543905906812 0.0662205650399 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194624547032 0.162205337803 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480028224339 0.0443174109184 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.3589403974 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 63.6247240618 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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