TPO 40- integrated
There is a debate among the penman and the orator about the possibility to live on venus as an unfamiliar planet. The reading uses 3 main reason to support his idea about impossibility of being on the surface of venus. however, the lecturer bring some reason to oppose with the passage.
First and foremost, the writer discusses about the pressure of the atmosphere on venus surface which is a great number to endure for human being. On the other hand, The lecturer has a different angle to view this issue. he suggests that a special type of balloon can provide a distance between the high pressure point and another spot to feel lower pressure.
Second, by the the text, in writers opinion it's not possible to live on venus because of lack in vital material such as water and oxygen. Conversely, the lecture speaks about compounding regular matters on the surface of the planet due to produce water and oxygen. he believes that it can be done in the station which is something like a balloon.
Finally, the passage argues about the lack of sun light on the surface of the planet. however, the professor make a suggestion to challenge the recent argue, by providing an example of reflection to the station from 2 angles. Indeed, he mentions that it is completely possible to collect the light comes from the sun on top and the below side of the balloon.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 220, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...ility of being on the surface of venus. however, the lecturer bring some reason to oppo...
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Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...s a different angle to view this issue. he suggests that a special type of balloon...
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Line 5, column 12, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ot to feel lower pressure. Second, by the the text, in writers opinion its not possib...
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Line 5, column 12, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ot to feel lower pressure. Second, by the the text, in writers opinion its not possib...
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Line 5, column 266, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...planet due to produce water and oxygen. he believes that it can be done in the sta...
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Line 7, column 87, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...sun light on the surface of the planet. however, the professor make a suggestion to cha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, finally, first, however, if, second, so, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 22.412803532 49% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 30.3222958057 152% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1121.0 1373.03311258 82% => OK
No of words: 240.0 270.72406181 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67083333333 5.08290768461 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47633241351 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 145.348785872 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.540411800872 104% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 419.366225166 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.4084334142 49.2860985944 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.4166666667 110.228320801 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 21.698381199 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.06452816374 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22807716918 0.272083759551 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777524441455 0.0996497079465 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473642441505 0.0662205650399 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131473165421 0.162205337803 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346358759716 0.0443174109184 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.3589403974 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.8541721854 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.2367328918 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.42419426049 102% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 63.6247240618 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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