TPO-42 - Integrated Writing Task Glass is a favored building material for modern architecture, yet it is also very dangerous for wild birds. Because they often cannot distinguish between glass and open air, millions of birds are harmed every year when the
The reading states adventages and also disadvantages of modern architectur glasses for wild birds; when made them injured. In this regard, these material could affects on eye sight and navigation of birds and cause this problem. In opposite side, the lecturer describes this solution are not usable as much as it seems. For one, one-way glasses mostly function like as a mirror for birds. When the sky picture reflect in bird's eyes it is more likely to become them blind. Next, glasses with strip painting has two option. If the straps be close together make it hard to see through for peoples; and if the painting lines be apart cause to percieve as a hole and attract the birds go through. Therefore, this method is not beneficial as well. And finally, magnet besed ideas are not applicable. Because this ability of birds just work and could navigate for long trips not short distances like streeing in towns.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?All university should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
- the bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity. in 2010(Cambridge Academic 12). 84
- TPO-43 - Independent Writing Task Imagine that you are in a classroom or a meeting. The teacher or the meeting leader says something incorrect In your opinion, which of the following is the best thing to do?-Interrupt and correct the mistake right away-Wa 60
- TPO 50 integrated 3
- Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.Discuss both these views and gi 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 161, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'affect'
Suggestion: affect
...d. In this regard, these material could affects on eye sight and navigation of birds an...
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Line 1, column 172, Rule ID: EYE_BROW[1]
Message: This word is usually spelt together: 'eyesight'.
Suggestion: eyesight
...regard, these material could affects on eye sight and navigation of birds and cause this ...
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Line 1, column 390, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ly function like as a mirror for birds. When the sky picture reflect in birds eyes i...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 12.0772626932 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 22.412803532 49% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 30.3222958057 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 755.0 1373.03311258 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 157.0 270.72406181 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80891719745 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 4.04702891845 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37324191171 2.5805825403 92% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 145.348785872 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.675159235669 0.540411800872 125% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 419.366225166 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9453650679 49.2860985944 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5 110.228320801 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7 21.698381199 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 7.06452816374 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.09492273731 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340618459715 0.272083759551 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108997647762 0.0996497079465 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632491502084 0.0662205650399 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.340618459715 0.162205337803 210% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.3589403974 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.8541721854 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.0289183223 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.2367328918 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.42419426049 95% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 63.6247240618 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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