TPO-49
The lecture and the reading passage are both about the navigation ways that humpback whales used to migration. While the passage states that these animals used stars to navigation the lecturer contradicts these claims by providing evidence to the contrary.
The author argues that these whales are so intelligent and can use stars and night lights to navigation. Conversely, the lecturer brings up the idea that some birds like ducks use stars for navigation but their intelligence are average so this is not relationship between intelligence and navigating by stars.
While the reading passage mentions that these whales migrated in straight lines and animals that migrate in straight use external object to navigation the lecture believes that animal use earth magnetic field to go straight.
Finally, the reading passage states that these whales sometime floating straight up and it is a evidence using stars for navigation; however, the professor insists that humpback look for animals which wanted to hunt and this behavior is not for watch stars.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 112, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...that humpback whales used to migration. While the passage states that these animals u...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 95, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...sometime floating straight up and it is a evidence using stars for navigation; ho...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, finally, however, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 30.3222958057 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 5.01324503311 219% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 891.0 1373.03311258 65% => OK
No of words: 167.0 270.72406181 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33532934132 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 4.04702891845 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60607718234 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 145.348785872 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526946107784 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 419.366225166 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 13.0662251656 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 21.2450331126 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.9166067146 49.2860985944 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.5 110.228320801 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8333333333 21.698381199 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06452816374 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323707124251 0.272083759551 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177704913846 0.0996497079465 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712069297112 0.0662205650399 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216090030562 0.162205337803 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586859663524 0.0443174109184 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.3589403974 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 53.8541721854 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.0289183223 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.2367328918 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 63.6247240618 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.7273730684 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.498013245 122% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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