The professor like the idea of humpback’s migration but discusses that humpbacks do not use stars to find their way of migration. This casts doubt on the text which states that humpbacks move in a straight way because they follow stars. In what follows professor mentions some reasons.
First of all, the lecturer asserts that there is no relationship between intelligence and following stars. Because other animals have this ability, too. For instance, some birds like ducks follow the stars but just because they are born with this characteristic and it is their inner capability. This contradicts the idea in reading which states that following stars needs high level of brain activities.
Another outstanding reason that professor mentions is that the humpbacks float on the ocean when they feel magnetic movement because they have a certain spot in their head called bio-magnetic and it is sensitive to the magnet. This opposes the reading, which cites that humpback float on the ocean because they want to sea the stars! Besides that, the stars are not available during daylight.
Finally, the lecturer discusses spy-hopping which means moving in a straight line. He said moving in a specific line is a pure explanation because other animals like sharks can do that, too. But not for migration but for hunting. This casts doubt on the text which states that humpbacks use this method to orient themselves.
To sum up, the professor agrees with the fascinating theory of humpback migration, but he disagrees with the accuracy of the evidence for all above-mentioned reasons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 198, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a straight way" with adverb for "straight"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...e text which states that humpbacks move in a straight way because they follow stars. In what foll...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, if, so, for instance, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 22.412803532 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 30.3222958057 106% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1373.03311258 97% => OK
No of words: 258.0 270.72406181 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16666666667 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73562420762 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 145.348785872 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511627906977 0.540411800872 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 392.4 419.366225166 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.3579533876 49.2860985944 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2142857143 110.228320801 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 21.698381199 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.06452816374 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273900329521 0.272083759551 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10353880253 0.0996497079465 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516813252419 0.0662205650399 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158457616563 0.162205337803 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287471744397 0.0443174109184 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.3589403974 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.8541721854 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.2367328918 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 63.6247240618 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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