Tpo 52
The reading and lecture both about colonization notion of asteroids. The author of the reading feels that in our galaxy thousand of asteroids and easy to colonization there for several reasons. The lecturer challenged the claim made by the author. He is on the opinion that the presenting claims are not practical and has a serious downside.
To begin with, the author argues that it has less gravity and easy to land of the ground. He also claims that less gravity allows the spacecraft to transfer more instrument and requires less fuel. The specific argument is challenged by the lecturer, He mentions that low gravity has a negative impact on the body. He also states that astronomer experienced muscle mask and bone stretch after spending several days on the spacecraft. Moreover, muscle and bones lose their density.
Second, the writer suggests that asteroids are full of valuable metals like gold, platinum which is a profitable source of earning. He also adds that from this business the project can easily sponsor. However, the lecturer rebuts this by mentioning that minerals are the profitable business but it is not the whole picture. He claims that the transportation rate is high and when the precious material will available to the market the consumer will be less interested and the market price will low.
Third, the author posits that asteroids come constantly near to the earth and require less time to transfer. He also mentions that it will be affordable and also cost-effective. In contrast, the lecturer position is that it is true that they orbit near to the earth but also pass the earth far distance. He also noted that when it departed the earth for a long time it will be challenging for the spacecraft to reach on earth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 121, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...of the reading feels that in our galaxy thousand of asteroids and easy to colonization t...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 195, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...colonization there for several reasons. The lecturer challenged the claim made by t...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, second, so, third, in contrast, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 12.0772626932 149% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 22.412803532 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1373.03311258 107% => OK
No of words: 297.0 270.72406181 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92592592593 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63114456033 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505050505051 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 446.4 419.366225166 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.172760298 49.2860985944 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0588235294 110.228320801 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4705882353 21.698381199 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35294117647 7.06452816374 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.3589403974 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.8541721854 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.2367328918 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 63.6247240618 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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