tpo 54
The material discusses the concept of ways could be use to reduce the salinity of the Salton Sea. While the reading looks at the topic from one perspective, the listening challenges certain points outlines in the reading topic.
Firstly, the reading details specific point regarding to this topic, namely, remove the salt from the lake by desalination processes. Next, dilute lake’s water by adding water from the Pacific Ocean. Finally, divided the lake into several section.
Conversely, the listening challenges the points, one specific contradiction is removing salts from the water may have health risk, because the Salton lake’s water contains chemical materials rather than salt; furthermore, these materials could be toxic, such as Sillinum. They will escape to atmosphere and people could breath it and cause critical health problem. In addition to that, add water from The Pacific Ocean is a big constructing project, while government does not have the recourse to this major construct, because the lake is hundred kilometers long. One final point, divided the lake my using separate walls could not be a solution for long time, because of the geological action. Provided that an earthquake happen, these walls will be collapsed and the water from the large portion wilth low amount of salt will mix with the small portion with large amount of salt.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 53, Rule ID: BE_USE_TO_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
... discusses the concept of ways could be use to reduce the salinity of the Salton Se...
^^^
Line 1, column 53, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
... discusses the concept of ways could be use to reduce the salinity of the Salton Se...
^^^
Line 2, column 236, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun section seems to be countable; consider using: 'several sections'.
Suggestion: several sections
...c Ocean. Finally, divided the lake into several section. Conversely, the listening challenges...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: BREATHE_BREATH[1]
Message: Did you mean 'breathe'? 'breath' is a noun.
Suggestion: breathe
...l escape to atmosphere and people could breath it and cause critical health problem. I...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 545, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...is major construct, because the lake is hundred kilometers long. One final point, divid...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...all portion with large amount of salt.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, may, regarding, so, while, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 12.0772626932 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 22.412803532 40% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 30.3222958057 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1157.0 1373.03311258 84% => OK
No of words: 219.0 270.72406181 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28310502283 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56307190433 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 145.348785872 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607305936073 0.540411800872 112% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 419.366225166 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.25165562914 479% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.6309523371 49.2860985944 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.7 110.228320801 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9 21.698381199 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7 7.06452816374 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.3589403974 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.8541721854 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.2367328918 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 63.6247240618 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
Read sample essays from ETS:
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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