The widespread of the internet has given people access to information on a level never experienced before? hoe this increase in the availability of information influenced life in today's world?
Since the beginning of the current century, world has seen lots of technological inventions, such as the internet. Some people believe that the internet does not make a big difference in people’s lives; However, there is a substantial body of evidence that casts doubts in this belief. From a personal perspective, the internet opens the door to a wealth of information that has changed people’s lives drastically, given that it has positive impact on many life’s aspects; such as communication, transportation, and education.
The first and foremost point, implementing the usage of the internet in schools improves the learning process. A vivid example can be given to shed light on what was elaborated above is nowadays all the schools in North America use the internet in their learning system, which incredibly maximize the potential learning outcomes. Provided that students use the internet while studying, they will have a great accessibility to different sorts of information; moreover, students can take online courses, which are cost-effective. Consequently, the internet has crucial benefits on education.
Next, couple with education’s improvement, transportation is another benefit of the internet. Nowadays, using the internet simplify people’s lives. Provided that people use the data connection ability, such as, GPS to navigate their destination, they can get where they need to go. Furthermore, people can use the phone Apps, such as Google Maps to know the traffic condition, and find the best routes; so, they can save time and gas. A recent survey that conducted by The University of Toronto found the internet has reduced the commute time drastically, which improves people’s quality of life. Therefore, the internet today is fundamental for people’s lives.
Although the previous benefits of the internet are the first ones which cross the mind at a glance, they are not the only available advantages. There is another subtle point that must be born in mind. The internet has improved the communication between people all over the world. To put it in another way, the internet has transferred the world into a global village. By using the internet people can access the phones’ Apps, such as WhatsApp and Viber, to communicate with other people at any place in the world. In addition to that, all people who access the web have social media accounts, either on Facebook, Twitter, or Instagram. They can communicate with other through means of likes, comments, or sharing. As a result, internet communication has made sure to contact people from two sides of the earth with no problem at all.
Taking everything into consideration; without a doubt, internet provide people with vast amount of information, which makes people’s lives easier than before. It is suggested that research and technology continue in order to develop and progress.
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| 2019-08-14 | Christine hanna | 90 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2463.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 456.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40131578947 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08091402053 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543859649123 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 760.5 618.680645161 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.896836739 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.086956522 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8260869565 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86956521739 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204527271661 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642454970797 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042991463838 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115752441104 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458465240484 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 86.8835125448 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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