tpo 54
The passage and the lecture are both about the salinity of the Salton sea and the efficient ways to reduce the saltiness of the lake. The writer indicates three solutions to ebb the amount of salt in the lake, While the lecturer contradicts with the author's solution, she thinks those are impractical ways.
First of all, The reading passage asserts that it is crucial to eliminate the salts from the lake by evaporating the water and deplete the salts from it, then the vapor water must be cooled down in order to convert to liquid form again without salt in it. However, the professor refuses this idea by mentioning the presence of toxic components in the initial salty water. She claims that evaporating that water with those ingredients can emit toxic gases into the air which has numerous harmful effects on the human's body. So it is not a good idea to do so.
Secondly, the author of the article proposes another way to confront with this phenomenon. He says they can channel the ocean's water to the lake and thin the lakes water. this hypothesis again is rejected by the professor because it needs a huge budget which the local governments can not afford it. Building several kilometers of pipes for conducting ocean water to the lake costs lots of money, therefore this idea is not financially reasonable.
Finally, the reading passage states that building walls in order to divide the lake into several parts can help solving the problem by letting the small sections to be salinity and control other sections. The professor accepts the idea but there is a considerable problem that makes it impractical. She mentions that throughout history that area has faced big and frequent earthquakes, so it is highly possible for walls to be broken by the shakes of the earth's surface. So building walls like previous solutions is not sufficient idea.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 251, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...While the lecturer contradicts with the authors solution, she thinks those are impracti...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...r to the lake and thin the lakes water. this hypothesis again is rejected by the pro...
^^^^
Line 4, column 113, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to solve' or 'solve'.
Suggestion: to solve; solve
...de the lake into several parts can help solving the problem by letting the small sectio...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 30.3222958057 145% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1373.03311258 112% => OK
No of words: 318.0 270.72406181 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83647798742 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5087403086 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 145.348785872 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550314465409 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 419.366225166 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3570975919 49.2860985944 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.857142857 110.228320801 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 21.698381199 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06452816374 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.3589403974 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.8541721854 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.2367328918 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.42419426049 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 63.6247240618 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.7273730684 172% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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