The Salton Sea in California facing an issue that the proportion of the salt has been increasing due to the extraordinary evaporation rate in the lake. In the reading passage, there are three possible solutions provided, then the lecturer gave her opinion and revealed the leak of them one by one.
The first proposal is to eliminate the salt from the lake’s water by a special desalination facility. However, the professor argues that this method probably arranges other problems. She mentioned that, even though the level of salt would be decreased, there are some other substances such as toxic chemicals, could be removed together and spread by certain ways like wind, then cause a health threat to the people in surrounding area.
The second suggestion is diluting the salt level by bringing ocean water into the lake. The professor against this solution by point out its possible flaw which is a need of high budget. As the professor mentioned, in fact, the shortest destination from the lake to the ocean is about 100km. Thus, this project which includes expansive pipelines will need a high sky budged, and apparently, the local government couldn’t be able to supply it.
The third solution in the reading passage is dividing the lake into sections by walls. The methodology here is the water in the major section will be refreshed by the water from small rivers, while the small sections will remain at the high salt level. Yet, the professor stated that this could only be a temporary solution. As frequent earthquakes would occur in this area, it will demolish the walls, then make the water mixed up again.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...t to the people in surrounding area. The second suggestion is diluting the sa...
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... couldn't be able to supply it. The third solution in the reading passag...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, however, if, second, so, then, third, thus, while, as to, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 30.3222958057 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1373.03311258 100% => OK
No of words: 274.0 270.72406181 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02189781022 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60461235908 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 145.348785872 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583941605839 0.540411800872 108% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 419.366225166 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4543692379 49.2860985944 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.846153846 110.228320801 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 21.698381199 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06452816374 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.3589403974 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.8541721854 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.2367328918 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.42419426049 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 63.6247240618 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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