Tpo 7. integrated
Tpo 7. integrated
The reading passage discussion is about the American's disaffection to use the eco-certification product and provide three reasons for its claim. However, the professor thinks there are good reasons to show that American people eventually attract to use these products.
First, the text declares that people in the United States do not trust to the advertisement because all of the common products label the new. This action makes advertisements untrustworthy. On the contrast, the lecture states that the American people do not treat with the advertisement same. They distinguish between the company's own goods and independent eco-certification products. In fact, they trust to the independent eco-certification products and have a tendency use their production.
Second, the author tells that the price of the eco-certification products is higher than the ordinary wood. So, people prefer to use the normal one. In contrast, the professor says that the price is a vital factor for American customers, but not always. They consider the cost factor when there was a competition between two products. Also, if the difference between them be lesser than 5%, they pay attention to other factors. The American's people pay attention to the environment's preservation.
Third, the reading explains the American' companies prefer to work with the regular wood because they can not sell most of the eco-certification products. However, the professor asserts that the company must attract to the eco-certification products both for their customer and competition. If they act slowly in capturing the customer, they will lose the business. Hence, most of the domestic companies are away from the wood business.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Integrated
Tpo 7. integrated The reading passage discussion is a...
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Tpo 7. integrated The reading passage discussion is about ...
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...entually attract to use these products. First, the text declares that people in ...
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... not trust to the advertisement because all of the common products label the new. This act...
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...d have a tendency use their production. Second, the author tells that the price ...
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... factor for American customers, but not always. They consider the cost factor when the...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'environments'' or 'environment's'?
Suggestion: environments'; environment's
...e Americans people pay attention to the environments preservation. Third, t...
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...ntion to the environments preservation. Third, the reading explains the American...
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...panies are away from the wood business.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, second, so, third, in contrast, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 30.3222958057 86% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 5.01324503311 319% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1373.03311258 106% => OK
No of words: 266.0 270.72406181 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48496240602 5.08290768461 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24763511066 2.5805825403 126% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 145.348785872 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 419.366225166 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2047883823 49.2860985944 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8235294118 110.228320801 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6470588235 21.698381199 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52941176471 7.06452816374 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.27373068433 211% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0466118298099 0.272083759551 17% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.037848177532 0.0996497079465 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133462488843 0.0662205650399 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.3589403974 91% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 53.8541721854 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.2367328918 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.42419426049 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 63.6247240618 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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